Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“shoes is a durable things”应为“shoes are durable items”。建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式，同时避免重复和口头语“uh”。

例: I don't buy shoes very often because they are durable and last a long time. Usually, I purchase new shoes about once a year, mainly when my old ones are worn out.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，句子中断且缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，避免口头语，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: To be honest, I rarely buy shoes online because I often find that the shoes don't fit well. Moreover, returning them can be troublesome, so I prefer buying shoes in physical stores.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但有口头语“uh”，且表达可以更自然。建议减少口头语，使用更地道的表达方式，并适当丰富细节。

例: I usually spend around 400 to 500 yuan on shoes because I believe that higher-priced shoes tend to be of better quality and last longer.

提案: 回答中有多处口头语，且表达不够流畅。建议减少重复的口头语，注意主谓一致（shoes play），并用更自然的表达方式说明理由。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I believe they have a greater impact on my daily experience than fashionable ones, which play a minor role in my overall outfit.

× I think shoes is a durable things I can wear for a long time.

✓ I think shoes are durable things I can wear for a long time.

这里'shoes'是复数，谓语动词和表语也应使用复数形式，'is'应改为'are'，'things'前的冠词'durable'应去掉或改为复数形式。

× I usually buy a SH shoes about once a year year if they are damaged.

✓ I usually buy a pair of shoes about once a year if they are damaged.

'shoes'是复数名词，前面不能直接用不定冠词'a'，应使用'pair of shoes'表示一双鞋。

× I seldom buy shoes on the Internet because I think I usually choose unsuitable shoes on the Internet and it's really a hassle to get refund

✓ I seldom buy shoes on the Internet because I think I usually choose unsuitable shoes there and it's really a hassle to get a refund.

'on the Internet'重复使用显得冗余，第二处可用'there'代替；'get refund'缺少冠词，应为'get a refund'。

× I prefer to choose shoes uh, on the.

✓ I prefer to choose shoes, uh, in person.

句子不完整，推测想表达的是更喜欢亲自挑选鞋子，'on the'后缺少内容，应补充完整。

× I usually spend 400 or CN¥500 for buying shoes because I think, uh, the higher price always represents the higher quality

✓ I usually spend 400 or CN¥500 on buying shoes because I think, uh, the higher price always represents higher quality.

'spend'后应接介词'on'表示花费在某物上；'the higher quality'中'quality'不可数，前面不加定冠词。

× I think shoes plays a little role on the whole outfits.

✓ I think shoes play a small role in the whole outfit.

'shoes'为复数，谓语动词应用复数形式'play'；'a little role'应改为'a small role'更合适；'on the whole outfits'应改为'in the whole outfit'。

× I don't need the fashion shoes, but the comfortable shoes can improve my umm, experience.

✓ I don't need fashionable shoes, but comfortable shoes can improve my experience.

'fashion shoes'应改为形容词形式'fashionable shoes'；'the'在此处不需要；'my umm, experience'中'umm'为口语填充词，应去除。