Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你嘅答案有啲重複同埋句子結構唔夠清晰，建議你用更簡潔嘅句子直接回應問題，並用連接詞令內容更流暢。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually purchase them twice a week. I enjoy getting new fashionable shoes to match different occasions, so I often change my shoes daily.

提案: 你嘅回答有語法錯誤同埋句子唔連貫，建議你用完整句子並用連接詞令答案更自然同流暢。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient. I don't have to spend time going to physical stores; instead, I just browse websites and choose the styles I like.

提案: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋表達唔夠清晰，建議你用更準確嘅語法同埋連接詞，並且避免句子未完成。

例: The amount I spend depends on the type of shoes. For instance, I usually buy sporty shoes for jogging and spend about $1000 each time. Since I buy shoes twice a month, I think this is reasonable.

提案: 你嘅答案有基本結構，但語法同用詞可以更自然，建議你用更流暢嘅句子同埋連接詞令答案更完整。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because they allow me to dress appropriately for different occasions. For example, I wear formal shoes to formal events to match the setting.

× Yes, I like buying shoes.

✓ Yes, I like to buy shoes.

喺英文入面，'like'後面可以接動名詞(-ing形式)或者不定詞(to + 動詞原形)，但喺正式或者口語中，'like to do'更常用嚟表示習慣或者偏好。呢度用'to buy'會更自然。

× I often buy shoes like twice a week because every time when I see the new version of shoes, I would like to buy them and also the new shoes are fashionable and I will change the type of my shoes twice a week and wear new shoes every day.

✓ I often buy shoes about twice a week because every time I see a new version of shoes, I would like to buy them. Also, the new shoes are fashionable, so I change the type of my shoes twice a week and wear new shoes every day.

'like'用嚟表示頻率時唔啱，應該用'about'或者'around'。另外，句子太長，應該拆開令意思更清晰。

× Yes, I always bought shoes.

✓ Yes, I always buy shoes.

'always'通常用喺現在時表示習慣動作，唔應該用過去式'bought'。應該用現在式'buy'。

× Buy shoes online.

✓ I buy shoes online.

呢句係片語，缺少主詞，唔係完整句子。應該加主詞'I'令句子完整。

× I do not need to waste my time to utilize my there's a time to go to the physical shop.

✓ I do not need to waste my time going to the physical shop.

原句結構混亂，'utilize my there's a time'唔通順。應該用'going to the physical shop'作為動名詞短語，表達去實體店嘅意思。

× Instead I just click on the website and buy the types I like.

✓ Instead, I just click on the website and buy the types I like.

句首應加逗號分隔，令句子更流暢。

× It depends on the types of shoes I buy.

✓ It depends on the type of shoes I buy.

'type'係單數，因為後面已經有複數'shoes'，所以用單數'type'更合適。

× I spent around $1000 every time.

✓ I spend around $100 every time.

句子描述習慣性動作，應用現在時'spend'。另外，$1000可能係打錯，根據上下文應該係$100。

× I buy like twice a month so I think it's quite reasonable to buy the shoes with.

✓ I buy shoes about twice a month, so I think it's quite reasonable to buy them.

'like'用嚟表示頻率唔啱，應用'about'。句尾'to buy the shoes with'結構不完整，應該簡化為'buy them'。

× Fashionable shoes can help me to wear the appropriate shoes in the appropriate occasions.

✓ Fashionable shoes can help me wear appropriate shoes on appropriate occasions.

'help me to wear'中'to'可省略，'in the appropriate occasions'應改為'on appropriate occasions'，因為'on'用於特定場合。

× For example, when I go to the formal event, I need to wear the formal shoes, so I'm the one who adapt to the occasion.

✓ For example, when I go to a formal event, I need to wear formal shoes, so I'm the one who adapts to the occasion.

'the formal event'改為'a formal event'更自然，因為未特指。'formal shoes'前面唔需要定冠詞。'adapt'要用第三人稱單數'adapts'因為主詞係'someone'。