Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且避免冗余。可以直接表达喜欢或不喜欢，并给出具体原因。

例: I don't really enjoy buying shoes because I find it boring. Instead, I prefer spending my time watching TV or going hiking, which I find more memorable and meaningful.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议直接回答是否买过，并说明原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online from websites like Taobao or Jingdong because it's cheaper and saves me a lot of time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的句型，明确说明不同情况下的花费，并避免重复。

例: It depends. If I buy sports shoes, I usually spend around 300 yuan, but for special styles or high-quality shoes, the price can be higher.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达有些重复和不流畅。建议简洁表达偏好，并用连词连接理由，使句子更自然。

例: To be honest, I prefer comfortable shoes because I often do sports, so I have high requirements for their quality and fit.

× Well, I dislike it because it was so boring things for me.

✓ Well, I dislike it because it was so boring for me.

这里的 'things' 是复数，但前面的 'it' 指代单数，导致单复数不一致。应去掉 'things'，使句子结构正确。

× I prefer to spend more time on watching TV or go hiking because it's more memorable and meaningful for me.

✓ I prefer to spend more time watching TV or going hiking because it's more memorable and meaningful for me.

动词 'prefer' 后面接动名词形式，且 'spend time' 后应直接接动名词，不能用介词 'on' 加动名词。

× Definitely my country.

✓ Definitely, in my country.

原句缺少谓语，结构不完整。应补充介词短语使句子完整。

× I often used Taobao or Jingdong to buy some things such as sports shoes, which is so cheaper and valuable for me because it saves my a lot of time.

✓ I often use Taobao or Jingdong to buy some things such as sports shoes, which are cheaper and valuable for me because they save me a lot of time.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，'used' 改为 'use'。'which' 指代复数 'things'，谓语应用复数 'are'。'so cheaper' 语法错误，应去掉 'so'。'saves my a lot of time' 中 'my' 多余，应去掉。

× It's depends, if I buy some sport shoes I may spend 300 yuans but if I need to buy a blue shoes or other special quality style maybe it's more expensive.

✓ It depends, if I buy some sports shoes I may spend 300 yuans but if I need to buy a pair of blue shoes or other special quality style maybe it's more expensive.

'It's depends' 中 'It's' 应为 'It'，因为 'depends' 是动词。'sport shoes' 应为复数 'sports shoes'。'a blue shoes' 中 'shoes' 是复数，前面不能用不定冠词 'a'，应改为 'a pair of blue shoes'。

× To be honest, I prefer comfortable shoes because I often do some sports, so I have a high requirement about the shoes and in addition sometimes I I like to compare with the quality.

✓ To be honest, I prefer comfortable shoes because I often do some sports, so I have high requirements for the shoes and in addition sometimes I like to compare the quality.

'have a high requirement about' 语法错误，应为 'have high requirements for'。'compare with the quality' 应为 'compare the quality'，'compare' 后直接接宾语。多余的重复 'I' 也应删除。