Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的时间表达方式，同时避免重复。

例: Yes, I really like buying sports shoes. I usually buy a new pair every two years, and for other types like formal shoes, I buy them about every five years.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，部分句子不完整，建议使用连接词使回答更流畅，并注意时态和表达准确性。

例: Yes, since I turned 18, I have always bought shoes online. Before that, I used to go shopping with my mother at physical stores. I find buying shoes online very convenient.

提案: 回答中数字和单位表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议明确表达价格并使用完整句子，同时避免犹豫词。

例: I usually spend about 200 dollars on sports shoes. It is a bit expensive compared to when I was younger, as I used to pay around 115 pounds per pair.

提案: 回答中使用了口语缩写和不正式表达，建议使用正式词汇并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I can't choose between fashionable and comfortable shoes because it depends on my outfit. If I am going to exercise, I prefer comfortable sports shoes, but if I want to look stylish, I choose fashionable shoes.

× Yes, actually I really love the sport shoes, maybe 2 years a shoes about sport shoes and another type of shoes like suit shoes, maybe five years one shoes.

✓ Yes, actually I really love sports shoes. Maybe I buy sports shoes every 2 years and another type of shoes like suit shoes every five years.

这里'shoes'是复数形式，前面不需要加冠词'the'，且表达购买频率时应使用复数形式和正确的时间表达方式。'a shoes'是不正确的，应该用复数形式。建议使用'buy sports shoes every 2 years'来表达购买频率。

× Yeah, I think after I was 18, I always buy shoes online.

✓ Yeah, I think after I was 18, I always bought shoes online.

句子中描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态'bought'，而不是现在时态'buy'。

× Before that, in my home, I usually buy shoes with my mother and go to the shop.

✓ Before that, at my home, I usually bought shoes with my mother and went to the shop.

'in my home'应改为'at my home'，表示在家里。且前半句描述过去习惯，动词应使用过去时态。

× So shop market to buy shoes.

✓ So we went to the market to buy shoes.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× Maybe 200 a sport shoes.

✓ Maybe 200 for a pair of sports shoes.

'a sport shoes'中'shoes'是复数，不能与不定冠词'a'连用。应使用'a pair of sports shoes'来表示一双运动鞋。

× Before that when I was young, I think it must be 115 lbs per shoes.

✓ Before that when I was young, I think it must have been 115 lbs per pair of shoes.

描述过去的价格，应该用过去完成时'have been'，且'shoes'应改为'pair of shoes'表示一双鞋。

× Maybe it's OK.

✓ Maybe that's OK.

此处用法无明显语法错误，但更自然的表达是'that's OK'，指代前文内容。

× Umm, I can't choose that.

✓ Umm, I can't choose between them.

'choose that'表达不清，应该用'choose between them'表示在两者之间选择。

× It may be depend on my OOTD.

✓ It may depend on my OOTD.

'may be depend'中'be'多余，应直接用'may depend'表示可能性。

× Do you know if I want to sport, I choose the comfortable shoes like sport shoes and if I want to be a fashion person, I will choose the fashionable shoes.

✓ Do you know if I want to do sports, I choose comfortable shoes like sports shoes, and if I want to be a fashionable person, I will choose fashionable shoes.

'want to sport'应改为'want to do sports'，'comfortable shoes like sport shoes'中'sport shoes'应为复数'sports shoes'，'a fashion person'应改为'a fashionable person'。