Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes, I do really like buying shoes and I buy shoes very often, usually in three months or so, because I like to follow new trends and I like trendy shoes.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes, I bought shoes online many times and I usually do online shopping and it's like great to buy shoes online because you can save your time by on buying online and you can see the pictures and sizes and all and usually they are delivered within 4 to 5 days.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
I spent a lot of money on shoes because I like branded shoes. Uh, brands such as Nike and Eldas are my favorites and also I like men's shoes as well because they're trendy and different.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more sustainable and reliable and uh, like it's good to buy comfortable shoes for long run because you have to wear them daily or biweekly. Because it's great to buy comfortable shoes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your reasons smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'I like to follow new trends and I like trendy shoes', you can say 'because I like to follow new trends, so I often buy trendy shoes.'
例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase them every three months because I like to follow new trends, so I often buy trendy shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 70.0提案: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly. For example, say 'I have bought shoes online many times because it saves time and allows me to see pictures and sizes. Usually, delivery takes 4 to 5 days.'
例: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because it saves time and allows me to see pictures and sizes. Usually, delivery takes 4 to 5 days.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 65.0提案: Use present tense consistently and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Provide clearer reasons and link your ideas. For example, 'I usually spend a lot on shoes because I prefer branded ones like Nike and Eldas, which are trendy and unique.'
例: I usually spend a lot on shoes because I prefer branded ones like Nike and Eldas, which are trendy and unique.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 60.0提案: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more sustainable and reliable, especially since I wear them daily or every two weeks.'
例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more sustainable and reliable, especially since I wear them daily or every two weeks.
文法
× it's like great to buy shoes online because you can save your time by on buying online
✓ it's great to buy shoes online because you can save your time by buying online
The phrase 'it's like great' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here. Also, 'by on buying' is incorrect preposition usage. The correct form is 'by buying' to indicate the method of saving time.
× I spent a lot of money on shoes because I like branded shoes.
✓ I spend a lot of money on shoes because I like branded shoes.
The question asks about usual spending habits, so present tense 'spend' is appropriate instead of past tense 'spent' which indicates a completed action.
× you can save your time by on buying online
✓ you can save your time by buying online
The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used after 'by'. The correct form is 'by buying' to express the means of saving time.
× for long run because you have to wear them daily or biweekly.
✓ for the long run because you have to wear them daily or biweekly.
The phrase 'for long run' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'for the long run'.
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