Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法准确性，如将“need it”改为“need them”，并避免重复表达，如“buy it until the old one broke”应改为“buy new ones only when the old ones are worn out”。此外，回答可以更自然简洁。

例: Not really, I only buy shoes when I need them, usually about once a year, because I use my shoes until they are worn out.

提案: 注意单词拼写错误，如“shows”应为“shoes”，并且表达应更自然，如“for many times”应改为“many times”。此外，避免重复“online”，可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I've bought shoes online many times because it's convenient and allows me to choose from a variety of styles.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“Either side usually spend”不合适，应改为“I usually spend”。“3 to CN¥500”表达不清，应统一货币单位。注意单词拼写，如“shows”应为“shoes”。句子结构应更清晰，避免冗余。

例: I usually spend between 300 and 500 Chinese yuan on shoes. I avoid the most expensive and the cheapest ones because I want shoes that are both comfortable and durable. For example, I often choose brands that offer good quality at a reasonable price.

提案: 回答结尾不完整，缺少原因说明。应避免口头语“Uh, well”，使表达更自然流畅。可以使用连接词如“because”后补充完整原因，使回答更连贯。

例: I used to prioritize fashionable shoes because they look stylish and help me make a good impression. However, recently I prefer comfortable shoes because I have a long commute and spend many hours on my feet at work.

× I only buy shoes when I need it, maybe once a year because I will buy it until the old one broke.

✓ I only buy shoes when I need them, maybe once a year because I will buy new ones when the old ones break.

这里的'shoes'是复数，指多双鞋，所以代词也应该用复数形式'them'。另外，'old one'和'it'也应改为复数形式'old ones'和'new ones'，因为指的是鞋子复数。

× I only buy shoes when I need it, maybe once a year because I will buy it until the old one broke.

✓ I only buy shoes when I need them, maybe once a year because I will buy new ones when the old ones break.

句中'the old one broke'使用了过去式'broke'，但句意是指将来或习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时'break'。

× Yes, I've bought shows online for many times because it's convenient and I can choose a different styles online.

✓ Yes, I've bought shoes online many times because it's convenient and I can choose different styles online.

'shows'应为'shoes'，是拼写错误。'styles'是复数，前面不需要加'different'的冠词'a'，应改为'different styles'。

× Either side usually spend between 3 to CN¥500 on shows.

✓ I usually spend between 3 to CN¥500 on shoes.

'Either side'用法错误，应为第一人称单数'I'。'shows'应为'shoes'。

× I prefer not to buy the most expensive ones, but I also avoid the cheapest because I want shoes that are both comfortable and durable.

✓ I prefer not to buy the most expensive ones, but I also avoid the cheapest ones because I want shoes that are both comfortable and durable.

'the cheapest'后应加复数名词'ones'，保持与前文一致。

× For example, I often choose brands that offer good quality as a reasonable price.

✓ For example, I often choose brands that offer good quality at a reasonable price.

介词' as '用法错误，表示价格时应使用'at a reasonable price'。

× Comfort is more important to me now because.

✓ Comfort is more important to me now.

句子末尾的'because'后面没有内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉'because'。