Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词和动词形式的正确使用。

例: I don't really like buying shoes. I usually buy them about once every six months because I find it troublesome to go to a store and try them on.

提案: 表达不够清晰，逻辑连接词使用不足，且句子结构有误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意表达因果关系时的准确性。

例: Yes, I sometimes buy shoes online, but I think it's not a good choice because I can't try them on, so the size might be wrong.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，数字表达不明确，且句子不连贯。建议明确数字单位，简化句子结构，并使用恰当的比较表达。

例: I usually spend about 2000 yuan on shoes. I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones, so I don't spend too much.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，缺少逻辑连接词，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用清晰的逻辑连接词，并准确表达观点。

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot on my way to work. Also, fashion changes quickly, so if I follow fashion, I might waste money.

× I often buy shoes like once in 1/2 year because I think go to a store and try on a shoes is very bothering.

✓ I often buy shoes like once in half a year because I think going to a store and trying on shoes is very bothering.

这里的“a shoes”是单复数错误，shoes是复数名词，不需要冠词a。建议去掉a，改为复数形式。

× I think go to a store and try on a shoes is very bothering.

✓ I think going to a store and trying on shoes is very bothering.

动词短语作主语时应使用动名词形式，故将go和try改为going和trying。

× Yes, I buy shoes online sometimes but I think it's really a bad choice because I can try on the shoes so the size will be wrong.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online sometimes but I think it's really a bad choice because I can't try on the shoes so the size might be wrong.

句中表达无法试穿鞋子，导致尺码可能不合适，原句中用can try on不符合语境，应改为can't try on，且用might表示可能性。

× I usually spend about 2000 prepared on shoes.

✓ I usually spend about 2000 yuan on shoes.

“prepared on”用法错误，正确表达是“spend money on something”，去掉prepared，补充货币单位。

× I prefer wearing comfortable shoes than two, uh, fashion shoes, so I won't spend too much on them.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable shoes to fashion shoes, so I won't spend too much on them.

“prefer ... than ...”用法错误，正确搭配是“prefer ... to ...”，且“two”应为“to”。

× I surely prefer wearing comfortable shoes since I work a lot during the way I go on the way I go to work and I think fashion change really quickly so if I pursue fashion I will maximize.

✓ I surely prefer wearing comfortable shoes since I work a lot on my way to work, and I think fashion changes really quickly, so if I pursue fashion, I will maximize it.

句子结构混乱，重复“on the way I go”，缺少连词和标点，动词时态错误，需调整句子结构使其通顺。