Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes and I often buy them online because I think having good shoes makes me happier.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because there are not many beautiful shoes in my city, so I prefer shopping online.

提案: 回答中时态混乱且数字表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和清晰的数字表达。

例: When I was a child, I usually spent about 300 on shoes, but now as a teenager, I often spend around 200.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达并使用恰当的连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I usually buy beautiful clothes, so I want my shoes to match my outfits.

× Yes I like buying shoes and I often buying shoes on go online because I think I I have a good shoes and can make me happier.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes and I often buy shoes online because I think I have good shoes and they can make me happier.

动词后面使用动名词形式时，必须确保动词形式正确。这里 'I often buying' 应改为 'I often buy'，因为 'often' 后面应接动词原形。此外，'on go online' 结构错误，应改为 'online'。另外，'a good shoes' 中 'shoes' 是复数，不能用不定冠词 'a'。

× Yes, because in my city, many be beautiful shoes. Uh, I must be both shoes go online because in in this story, I don't I don't say to can I don't say to see beautiful shoes.

✓ Yes, because in my city, there are many beautiful shoes. Uh, I must buy shoes online because in this city, I don't get to see beautiful shoes.

'many be beautiful shoes' 结构错误，应使用 'there are many beautiful shoes' 来表达存在。'must be both shoes go online' 语法错误，应改为 'must buy shoes online'。句子中多处动词和结构使用不当，需要调整以符合英语语法。

× When I was a child I often pay about £300 to buy a shoes, but now I was a teenager I often pay £2000 to buy a shoes.

✓ When I was a child, I often paid about £300 to buy shoes, but now I am a teenager, I often pay £2000 to buy shoes.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去式 'paid' 而非现在式 'pay'。'a shoes' 错误，'shoes' 是复数，不用不定冠词 'a'。另外，'now I was a teenager' 时态错误，应为 'now I am a teenager'。

× I prefer fashionable, uh, shoes. For example, I usually to buy some beautiful, beautiful clothes, so I want to buy a fashionable, fashionable shoes to, to paint my, uh, my clothes.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes. For example, I usually buy some beautiful clothes, so I want to buy fashionable shoes to match my clothes.

'usually to buy' 中 'to' 不应出现，应直接用动词原形 'buy'。'a fashionable, fashionable shoes' 中 'shoes' 是复数，不用 'a'。'to paint my clothes' 用词不当，应改为 'to match my clothes' 表达搭配的意思。