Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yeah, I like buying shoes because I like all kinds of shoes. They were so beautiful. Sometimes I buy shoes for three months.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes, I borrow my first pair of shoes online because I sing online. There was so many kind of shoes. There was also beautiful and it's it's chip chop.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
Umm, $15 to $19.00 because I think the expensive shoes I can buy, umm, I really like uh, triple shoes because they was useful.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
A lot of them because when I played basketball I will I will use fashionable shoes. When I go work, I will I will wear comfortable shoes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 55.0提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议你直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且避免重复。比如说明你喜欢买鞋的原因和频率。
例: Yes, I like buying shoes because I enjoy different styles. I usually buy new shoes every three months.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达。建议你直接回答问题，说明你是否买过鞋子，描述网上买鞋的体验，使用正确的词汇和句子。
例: Yes, I bought my first pair of shoes online. There were many kinds of shoes, and some were beautiful and affordable.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议你明确说明你通常花多少钱买鞋，并解释原因，使用连贯的句子。
例: I usually spend between $15 and $19 on shoes because I prefer affordable but useful shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够直接，句子重复且语法错误。建议你直接表达你的偏好，并用连贯的句子说明不同场合的选择。
例: I prefer fashionable shoes when I play basketball, but I wear comfortable shoes for work.
文法
× They were so beautiful.
✓ They are so beautiful.
The student is talking about a general preference for shoes, so the present tense 'are' should be used instead of the past tense 'were'.
× Sometimes I buy shoes for three months.
✓ Sometimes I buy shoes every three months.
The phrase 'for three months' is incorrect here; 'every three months' correctly expresses the frequency of buying shoes. Also, present tense is appropriate for habitual actions.
× I borrow my first pair of shoes online because I sing online.
✓ I bought my first pair of shoes online because I shop online.
The student incorrectly used 'borrow' and 'sing' instead of 'bought' and 'shop'. 'Bought' is the correct past tense verb for purchasing, and 'shop' is the correct verb for buying online.
× There was so many kind of shoes.
✓ There were so many kinds of shoes.
'There was' is singular and does not agree with the plural 'many kinds'. The correct plural form is 'There were'. Also, 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' to match 'many'.
× There was also beautiful and it's it's chip chop.
✓ There were also beautiful ones and they are cheap.
'There was' should be 'There were' to agree with plural 'beautiful ones'. 'It's it's chip chop' is incorrect; it should be 'they are cheap' to describe the shoes.
× because I think the expensive shoes I can buy, umm, I really like uh, triple shoes because they was useful.
✓ because I think the expensive shoes I can buy, umm, I really like uh, triple shoes because they are useful.
The verb 'was' is past tense and does not agree with plural subject 'they'. The correct present tense verb is 'are'.
× When I played basketball I will I will use fashionable shoes.
✓ When I play basketball, I will use fashionable shoes.
The time clause 'When I played basketball' should be in present tense 'When I play basketball' when followed by 'will' for future tense.
× When I go work, I will I will wear comfortable shoes.
✓ When I go to work, I will wear comfortable shoes.
The phrase 'go work' is incorrect; it should be 'go to work'. Also, the repeated 'I will' is redundant and should be corrected to a single 'I will'.
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