Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes, I love my shoe. Back then when I was a student, I often buy. I often bought shoes, one every two months. What a waste of money. But but after getting married now I really buy any shoes because I become more frugal and I just want to save money.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
They're honest, I don't want to buy shoe on Hawaii but one time I try, I just try to buy a shoe which is really beautiful. But before ordering it, I checked the reviews and sizing just to make sure.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
Well now I only buy shoe if I need it, so I don't care much about the price. As long as it fits me really well I'll buy it. So maybe I will spend more more than one or two millions for another I guess.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
Well, it really depends uh, when it comes to uh sneakers error always prefer compressible and I only choose well known brands because of it offer better comforts and durability. But Speaking of high heels air prefer fashion.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 55.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý. Ví dụ, bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trong 3-5 câu, tránh dài dòng và lặp lại ý.
例: Yes, I really like buying shoes. When I was a student, I used to buy new shoes every two months, which was quite a waste of money. However, after getting married, I have become more frugal and now I only buy shoes when necessary to save money.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 50.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết mạch lạc. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về trải nghiệm mua giày online và cách bạn kiểm tra trước khi mua.
例: Honestly, I usually don't like buying shoes online, but once I tried because I found a really beautiful pair. Before ordering, I carefully checked the reviews and sizing to make sure it would fit me well.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về số tiền bạn chi tiêu và lý do chọn mua giày phù hợp.
例: Nowadays, I only buy shoes when I really need them, so the price is not my main concern. As long as the shoes fit me well, I am willing to spend around one or two million VND or even more.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 55.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời mạch lạc, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, dùng từ chính xác và liên kết ý tốt. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể so sánh sở thích với từng loại giày và lý do lựa chọn.
例: It depends on the type of shoes. For sneakers, I always prefer comfortable ones and usually choose well-known brands because they offer better comfort and durability. However, when it comes to high heels, I prefer fashionable designs.
文法
× Yes, I love my shoe.
✓ Yes, I love my shoes.
The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because people usually have more than one shoe and the context implies a general liking for shoes, not just one shoe.
× Back then when I was a student, I often buy.
✓ Back then when I was a student, I often bought shoes.
The sentence refers to a past time ('Back then'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'bought' instead of present tense 'buy'.
× I often bought shoes, one every two months.
✓ I often bought shoes, one pair every two months.
The word 'shoes' is plural but to specify quantity, 'one pair' is more appropriate because shoes come in pairs.
× But but after getting married now I really buy any shoes because I become more frugal and I just want to save money.
✓ But after getting married, now I really don't buy any shoes because I have become more frugal and I just want to save money.
The sentence needs a negative modal verb 'don't' to express not buying shoes. Also, 'become' should be in present perfect 'have become' to indicate a change over time.
× They're honest, I don't want to buy shoe on Hawaii but one time I try, I just try to buy a shoe which is really beautiful.
✓ To be honest, I don't want to buy shoes in Hawaii but one time I tried, I just tried to buy a shoe which was really beautiful.
'They're honest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'To be honest'. Also, 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' when general, and 'try' should be past tense 'tried' to match past time. Preposition 'on Hawaii' should be 'in Hawaii'.
× I don't want to buy shoe on Hawaii but one time I try, I just try to buy a shoe which is really beautiful.
✓ I don't want to buy shoes in Hawaii but one time I tried, I just tried to buy a shoe which was really beautiful.
The correct preposition for locations like islands or states is 'in' not 'on'. Also, 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' when general.
× But before ordering it, I checked the reviews and sizing just to make sure.
✓ But before ordering it, I checked the reviews and sizing just to make sure.
This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.
× Well now I only buy shoe if I need it, so I don't care much about the price.
✓ Well now I only buy shoes if I need them, so I don't care much about the price.
The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to shoes in general. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'shoes'.
× Well now I only buy shoe if I need it, so I don't care much about the price.
✓ Well now I only buy shoes if I need them, so I don't care much about the price.
The pronoun 'it' is singular but should be 'them' to refer to the plural noun 'shoes'.
× So maybe I will spend more more than one or two millions for another I guess.
✓ So maybe I will spend more than one or two million for another, I guess.
The word 'millions' should be singular 'million' when used with numbers like 'one or two'. Also, the repeated word 'more' is a typo and should be corrected.
× Well, it really depends uh, when it comes to uh sneakers error always prefer compressible and I only choose well known brands because of it offer better comforts and durability.
✓ Well, it really depends. When it comes to sneakers, I always prefer comfortable ones and I only choose well-known brands because they offer better comfort and durability.
'Error' is a mishearing or typo and should be 'I'. 'Compressible' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. 'It offer' should be 'they offer' to agree with plural 'brands'. Also, 'comforts' should be singular 'comfort'.
× Well, it really depends uh, when it comes to uh sneakers error always prefer compressible and I only choose well known brands because of it offer better comforts and durability.
✓ Well, it really depends. When it comes to sneakers, I always prefer comfortable ones and I only choose well-known brands because they offer better comfort and durability.
The adjective 'compressible' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe shoes.
× But Speaking of high heels air prefer fashion.
✓ But speaking of high heels, I prefer fashion.
'Air' is a mishearing or typo and should be 'I'. Also, 'fashion' should be 'fashionable shoes' or 'fashion' as a noun is acceptable but better to clarify.
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