Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且略显重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often. I prefer high-quality shoes that last a long time, so I only shop when I really need new ones.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意句子结构，避免重复词汇，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are special discounts during holidays, which makes the prices lower than in physical stores, so I can save money.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且句子不完整。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并完整表达观点。

例: I usually spend less than 500 RMB on each pair of shoes. I believe affordable shoes can still be durable and comfortable.

提案: 回答内容清晰且有具体理由，但句子结构略显重复。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富词汇。

例: I own both fashionable and comfortable shoes, but I definitely prefer comfortable ones because I often go hiking and cycling on weekends to relax and exercise.

× Yes, I have the I often buy shoes online because there are many special discounts during holidays, so the prices are more affordable than lower than in physical stores so I can save some money.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are many special discounts during holidays, so the prices are more affordable than in physical stores, so I can save some money.

句子中出现了多余的词汇“have the I”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除多余部分，使句子通顺。

× My budgets generally under 500 RMB for each shoes.

✓ My budget is generally under 500 RMB for each pair of shoes.

“budgets”应为单数“budget”，因为这里指的是个人的预算总额；“each shoes”错误，应该用“each pair of shoes”表示每双鞋。

× I believe those affordable shoes can still be can still be durable and comfortable and with.

✓ I believe those affordable shoes can still be durable and comfortable.

句子中“can still be”重复，且结尾“and with”不完整，应删除多余部分并补全句子，使其完整且通顺。

× I often go hiking and ride bike during weekends to have a rest and exercise.

✓ I often go hiking and ride bikes during weekends to have a rest and exercise.

“ride bike”应为“ride bikes”，表示骑自行车，且“bikes”应为复数形式。