Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复和断断续续的回答。

例: I don't really enjoy buying shoes, but I usually purchase a new pair about once a month.

提案: 回答中断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always buy shoes online because it is convenient and there are more types of shoes to choose from.

提案: 回答不完整且不连贯，缺少具体信息。建议用完整句子表达价格范围并补充相关细节。

例: I usually spend between $18 and $100 when I buy new shoes, depending on the style and quality.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I am a student and need to go to school five days a week. Therefore, I make sure my shoes are suitable for sports activities.

× I often buy a. Buy the shoes. Once a month.

✓ I often buy shoes once a month.

原句中断句不完整，导致句子结构混乱。应将分散的短语合并成完整句子，表达清晰。

× Yes, I always bought shoes online because I think it's. Convenience.

✓ Yes, I have always bought shoes online because I think it's convenient.

句中时态不一致，'always bought'应使用现在完成时表示持续的经历，'convenience'应改为形容词'convenient'修饰句子。

× And. There are more. Types of shoes I can choose.

✓ And there are more types of shoes to choose from.

'choose'后应加介词'from'表示选择范围，且句子断句不完整，应合并成完整句。

× They always cost. Me. $18 to $100. Buy new shoes.

✓ New shoes always cost me $18 to $100.

原句断句不完整且语序混乱，应调整为完整且符合英语习惯的句子结构。

× I need to go to schools. For five days, once a week.

✓ I need to go to school five days a week.

'go to school'通常用单数，表示上学；'five days a week'是固定表达，表示每周五天。

× So I need to. Make sure my shoes is. Suitable for doing some sports.

✓ So I need to make sure my shoes are suitable for doing some sports.

主语'shoes'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，且句子断句不完整，应合并成完整句。