Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy them twice a year. My favorite brands are Nike and Puma.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
No, I have never bought shoes online because I'm afraid they might not fit my feet properly.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
I usually spend about ¥5000 on new shoes, which is less than most people because I prefer affordable options.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I wear them all day when I walk and go out.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、もう少し具体的な理由や感情を加えるとより良くなります。例えば、なぜそのブランドが好きなのか、どのような場面で履くのかを説明すると良いでしょう。
例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase them twice a year. I prefer brands like Nike and Puma because they offer both style and comfort, which suits my active lifestyle.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 80.0提案: 理由は明確ですが、もう少し詳しく説明し、代わりにどのように購入しているかを述べると良いです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。
例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I'm afraid they might not fit my feet properly. Therefore, I prefer to buy shoes in physical stores where I can try them on before purchasing.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答は具体的で良いですが、なぜ手頃な価格を好むのか、またはどのような種類の靴を買うのかを加えるとさらに良くなります。
例: I usually spend about ¥5000 on new shoes, which is less than most people because I prefer affordable options. This way, I can buy several pairs for different occasions without spending too much.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 90.0提案: 理由が明確で良いですが、もう少し具体的な例や比較を加えると説得力が増します。例えば、どのような場面で快適さが重要かを説明すると良いでしょう。
例: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I wear them all day when I walk and go out. For instance, when I travel or run errands, comfort is more important than style to avoid foot pain.
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