Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy a new pair every six months because I don't own many. As a student, I have to manage my budget carefully.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的比较结构和连词，使句子更连贯，避免模糊表达。

例: Yes, I prefer buying shoes online because it is more convenient than shopping in stores. Also, online shops offer a wider range of styles, and it often saves me a lot of money.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不准确，建议注意数字和单位的正确使用，避免发音或拼写错误，同时句子结构需更清晰。

例: I usually spend about 500 yuan on shoes. Although it's a bit expensive for a student like me, I think the shoes from Express offer excellent quality, so I choose to buy them.

提案: 回答中句子不完整且表达不流畅，建议使用完整句子并合理连接观点，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更自然。

例: I used to prefer fashionable shoes, but now I value comfort more. Comfortable shoes make me feel at ease, especially since I enjoy sports, which requires good support.

× When I buying shoes, I guess really excited and I own less shoes and I often buy a new pair of shoes about every six months.

✓ When I buy shoes, I get really excited and I own fewer shoes, and I often buy a new pair of shoes about every six months.

这里的动词buy应该用一般现在时的原形buy，而不是buying，因为这是描述习惯动作。

× I own less shoes

✓ I own fewer shoes

shoes是可数名词，应该用fewer而不是less。

× I'm student, I'm doing a lot of money.

✓ I'm a student, I don't have a lot of money.

缺少冠词a，且表达“我没有很多钱”时应使用否定句don't have。

× compared to buy shoes in store

✓ compared to buying shoes in store

动词比较时，应该用动名词形式buying，而不是不定式buy。

× Whatever it saves a tons of.

✓ Anyway, it saves a ton of money.

句子结构混乱，应该用Anyway引导转折，a ton of money表示大量钱。

× I usually spend 500 years on shoes.

✓ I usually spend 500 yuan on shoes.

years是“年”，应为货币单位yuan。

× I think it's a little pressy for a student

✓ I think it's a little pricey for a student

单词pressy拼写错误，应为pricey，意为“价格高的”。

× the shoes at the Express can offer a excellent quality

✓ the shoes at the store can offer excellent quality

Express可能是误用，应为store，且a excellent应为excellent（元音开头形容词前不用a）。

× The comfort. Comfortable shoes makes me at ease and it's very convenient to work more more ever.

✓ Comfortable shoes make me at ease and it's very convenient to work. Moreover,

makes应改为make以符合复数主语comfortable shoes；more more ever应为moreover，表示“此外”。

× I'm into the sports, it's one reason of this.

✓ I'm into sports; that's one reason for this.

the sports应为sports，且reason后应接介词for。