Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

例: No, I don't like buying shoes very much. I usually buy about two pairs a year.

提案: 回答内容偏离个人经历，且语法和表达不够自然。建议直接回答个人经历，并用连词连接细节，使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient. Moreover, returning items is easy, which makes online shopping stress-free.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，且使用了填充词。建议用完整句子表达价格范围和购买偏好，避免口头语。

例: I usually spend between 60 and 100 pounds on a pair of shoes because I prefer moderately priced shoes that are of good quality.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，且有口头语。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连词使内容更连贯。

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because as people reach their thirties, they tend to value comfort more. I feel the same way and dislike wearing shoes that hurt me.

× I buy shoes. Like umm 2 shoe two pair of shoes in a year.

✓ I buy shoes. Like umm 2 pairs of shoes in a year.

这里的'shoe'应该用复数形式'pairs'，因为表示的是两双鞋。英语中数量词后面名词要用复数形式。

× Chinese rely heavily on an online platforms to go shopping because it is really easy to place the order and return the order.

✓ Chinese rely heavily on online platforms to go shopping because it is really easy to place the order and return the order.

'an'是用于单数可数名词前的冠词，而'platforms'是复数名词，不能用'an'。应去掉'an'。

× I prefer buying moderate prices shoes which have good qualities and good.

✓ I prefer buying moderately priced shoes which have good quality and are good.

'moderate prices shoes'表达不正确，应该用副词'moderately'修饰过去分词'priced'构成形容词短语；'qualities'应为不可数名词'quality'；句尾'and good'不完整，需补充谓语。

× When people turn to their, uh, 30s, I think they pay more attention to the comfort.

✓ When people turn 30, I think they pay more attention to comfort.

'turn to their 30s'结构不正确，正确表达是'turn 30'；'the comfort'中'the'不必要，'comfort'作为抽象名词不加冠词。