Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议练习使用正确的时态和更清晰的句子结构，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes once a month because I am busy with work and need comfortable shoes for daily use.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不够清晰。建议加强时态和词汇的准确使用，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient and saves me time, especially since I am busy with work.

提案: 回答中充满了犹豫和重复，语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议减少语气词，使用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体细节。

例: I usually don't want to spend too much money on shoes, but if I see a beautiful pair that I like, I will buy them.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议练习使用正确的句型和词汇，表达清楚自己的偏好并给出理由。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I enjoy sports, and comfortable shoes help me perform better and avoid injuries.

× I think one month once for months because I have a lot of work for my experience, so I don't have enough money to shopping and it's enough for me.

✓ I think once a month because I have a lot of work for my experience, so I don't have enough money to shop and it's enough for me.

这里“one month once for months”表达不正确，应该用“once a month”表示“每个月一次”。另外，“money to shopping”中“shopping”应为动词原形“shop”。

× Yes, definitely I very urly to bought shoes online because it's so comfy convenience and I think it northwest my time because I have a lot of work in my company so I think it's so convenient and easy.

✓ Yes, definitely I very rarely buy shoes online because it's so comfortable and convenient and I think it saves my time because I have a lot of work in my company so I think it's so convenient and easy.

“bought”是过去式，但句子表达的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“buy”。“very urly”应为“very rarely”。“comfy convenience”应改为“comfortable and convenient”。“northwest my time”应为“saves my time”。

× I think in fact, I don't, uh, want, uh, waste a lot of money to board your shoes, but I, if I saw a, a beautiful shoes and I think it's very surprise, surprise. So I when I shopping, I will buy it.

✓ I think in fact, I don't want to waste a lot of money on buying shoes, but if I see beautiful shoes and I think it's very surprising, I will buy them when I shop.

“waste a lot of money to board your shoes”中“to board”用法错误，应为“waste a lot of money on buying shoes”。“if I saw”应为“if I see”表示条件句。“surprise”应为形容词“surprising”。“when I shopping”应为“when I shop”。

× Actually I'd like prefer to buy comfortable shoes because I like sports. It's show it should buy some comfortable shoes to let me sport when let me comfortable when I was sport sporting.

✓ Actually, I'd prefer to buy comfortable shoes because I like sports. It shows I should buy some comfortable shoes to let me play sports comfortably.

“I'd like prefer”重复，应选其一。“It's show”应为“It shows”。“let me sport”用词不当，应为“let me play sports”。“let me comfortable”应为“let me be comfortable”或“let me play sports comfortably”。“when I was sport sporting”表达混乱，应简化为“play sports comfortably”。