Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で簡潔ですが、理由の説明がやや不十分で、自然な英語表現や詳細な説明を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、なぜお気に入りの靴を長く履きたいのか、頻度についても触れるとより良いです。

例: I don't like buying shoes very often because I prefer to wear my favorite pair for a long time. This way, I can get used to them and feel comfortable without constantly changing.

提案: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、繰り返しや文法の誤りがあり、より自然で流暢な表現に改善が必要です。また、オンライン購入の経験についてもう少し具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online last year. However, the size didn't fit me well, so I decided to buy shoes directly from the store to ensure a better fit.

提案: 回答にためらいや曖昧な表現が多く、もっと自信を持って具体的に答えることが求められます。また、金額の説明に加えて、なぜその金額が適切だと思うのか理由を述べると良いでしょう。

例: I usually spend around CN¥10,000 on shoes. I think this amount is reasonable because it balances quality and price, so I get good value for my money.

提案: 回答は内容が明確で状況に応じた選択を説明していますが、文法ミスや単語の誤用（"where"→"wear"）が見られます。より正確な表現とスムーズなつなぎ言葉を使うと良いでしょう。

例: I think it depends on the situation. I like to wear fashionable shoes when I go out or hang out with friends. However, when I go hiking or visit an amusement park, I prefer comfortable shoes for practicality.

× I like where fashionable shoes when I go out or hang out with friends.

✓ I like wearing fashionable shoes when I go out or hang out with friends.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing) to express preference for an activity. 'Where' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'wear'. The sentence should use 'wearing' to indicate the action of putting on shoes.

× so I decided to buy my shoes on the store.

✓ so I decided to buy my shoes in the store.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to buying something at a physical location. The correct preposition is 'in' to indicate being inside the store.