Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не является естественным и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более связные и полные предложения, избегать избыточности и уточнять частоту покупок.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially trainers because they are comfortable. I usually buy new shoes every few months when I need them.

提案: Ответ неполный и неясный, содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать связные предложения и объяснять причины.

例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to see and try them on before buying.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечетко выражен. Следует использовать правильную лексику и структуру предложения, а также избегать пауз и повторов.

例: I usually spend around 20 to 25 dollars on shoes, depending on the style and quality.

提案: Ответ нечеткий и содержит повторения. Нужно строить предложения более логично, использовать связки и объяснять предпочтения более подробно.

例: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable, but if I have to choose, I would pick comfortable shoes because they are better for my feet.

× I often buy the shoes I like trainers because it's comfortable.

✓ I often buy shoes I like, trainers, because they're comfortable.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'shoes' when speaking generally. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with the plural noun 'trainers'.

× Sometimes we because I would like see and take it.

✓ Sometimes I do, but I would like to see and try them first.

The sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure. 'We' is incorrect here, and 'see and take it' should be 'see and try them' to make sense in context.

× I do usually spend on shows uh uh, 2020 $20.00 or $25.

✓ I usually spend about $20 or $25 on shoes.

'Shows' is a misspelling of 'shoes'. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'shoes' in this context. The sentence structure is awkward and needs simplification.

× I do prefer fashionable and comfortable show but I love comfortable shows because it's comfortable my my leg and I'm.

✓ I prefer fashionable and comfortable shoes, but I love comfortable shoes because they're comfortable for my legs.

'Show' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'shoes'. The phrase 'comfortable my my leg and I'm' is unclear and corrected to 'comfortable for my legs'.