Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'buying shoe' nên là 'buying shoes', 'very every few months' nên là 'every few months'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng số nhiều đúng và tránh lỗi thừa từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể ngắn gọn hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help me express my personal style. I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially during sales or when I need specific ones for work or sports. For instance, I recently bought a pair of running shoes to improve my exercise routine.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến việc sử dụng số nhiều và mạo từ, ví dụ 'bought shoe' nên là 'bought shoes', 'a wide variety of style' nên là 'a wide variety of styles'. Ngoài ra, câu 'Is it very convenient' không đúng ngữ pháp, nên là 'It is very convenient'. Hãy luyện tập để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of styles and compare prices without leaving my home. For example, I once purchased running shoes from an international website that offered a better deal than local stores.

提案: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'durable events' không phù hợp, nên là 'durable materials' hoặc 'durable shoes'. Câu 'choose brand known' thiếu mạo từ 'a brand'. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

例: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes, typically around $50 to $100 per pair. I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and durable. For example, I often choose a brand known for its long-lasting materials, which saves me money in the long run.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng số nhiều đúng, ví dụ 'comfortable shoe' nên là 'comfortable shoes'. Ngoài ra, 'practicalities and food health' có thể là lỗi đánh máy, nên là 'practicality and foot health'. Hãy luyện tập để câu trả lời tự nhiên, chính xác và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I value practicality and foot health. For instance, when I have to walk or stand for long periods, comfortable shoes prevent pain and fatigue. Although fashionable shoes may look appealing, I believe comfort is more important for everyday wear.

× Yes, I enjoy buying shoe quite a lot because they allow me to express my personal style.

✓ Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite a lot because they allow me to express my personal style.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items in general. In English, when talking about things in general, the plural form is used.

× I usually buy new shoes very every few months, especially when these are sales or when I need something specific for works or sport.

✓ I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially when there are sales or when I need something specific for work or sport.

The phrase 'very every few months' is incorrect; 'very' should be removed. 'Works' should be 'work' because 'work' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'these are sales' should be 'there are sales' to correctly express existence.

× Yes, I have bought shoe online several times.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online several times.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items in general.

× Is it very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of style and compare prices without leaving my homes.

✓ It is very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of styles and compare prices without leaving my home.

The sentence should start with 'It is' instead of 'Is it'. 'Style' should be plural 'styles' because it refers to multiple types. 'Homes' should be singular 'home' because it refers to the speaker's residence.

× For example, I once purchased it running shoe from an inter international website which offer better deal than local store.

✓ For example, I once purchased a running shoe from an international website which offers a better deal than a local store.

'It' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Inter international' is redundant; 'international' is correct. 'Offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'website'. 'Deal' should be preceded by 'a'. 'Local store' should be preceded by 'a'.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around $50.00 to $100 per pair.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around $50.00 to $100.00 per pair.

Adding '.00' after 100 maintains consistency in formatting the amounts.

× I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and durable events.

✓ I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and durable.

The word 'events' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context and should be removed.

× If they cost a bit more, for example, I often choose brand known for their long lasting material which save me money.

✓ If they cost a bit more, for example, I often choose brands known for their long-lasting materials which save me money.

'Brand' should be plural 'brands' to agree with 'their'. 'Long lasting' should be hyphenated as 'long-lasting'. 'Material' should be plural 'materials' to match 'brands'. 'Save' should be 'save' because the plural subject 'brands' requires plural verb.

× I prefer comfortable shoe over fashionable ones because I value practicalities and food health.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I value practicality and good health.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes'. 'Practicalities' should be singular 'practicality'. 'Food health' is incorrect; it should be 'good health'.

× For instance, when I have to walk or stand for long periods, comfortable shoe prevent pain and fatigue.

✓ For instance, when I have to walk or stand for long periods, comfortable shoes prevent pain and fatigue.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to agree with plural verb 'prevent'.