Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议用简洁明了的句子直接回答问题，并补充购买频率的具体信息。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often. I usually buy sneakers, slippers, and boots depending on the season.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答是否买过网购鞋子，并说明频率或原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online. In fact, most of my shoes were purchased from online stores because it's convenient.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议直接给出花费范围，并简要说明不常计算花费的原因。

例: I usually spend between 200 to 1000 Chinese Yuan on shoes each month. However, I don't often keep track of the exact amount.

提案: 回答表达重复且不够连贯。建议用完整句子表达偏好，并用原因和结果支持观点，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day. Comfortable shoes make me feel relaxed and prevent foot pain.

× I have a righty kind of shoes, just like sneakers, uh, sleep on and some boots and so on.

✓ I have a right kind of shoes, just like sneakers, uh, slip-ons and some boots and so on.

这里'shoes'是复数，'kind'前面应该用单数形式'kind'，而不是'righty'（应为'right'），另外'sleep on'应为'slip-on'，表示便鞋。复数和单数的搭配需要注意。

× It almost happened the last uh, every shoes I had were bought through Li, bought on a bottle.

✓ Almost all the shoes I had were bought through Li, bought on a website.

句子结构混乱，'It almost happened the last uh'不合适，应改为'Almost all the shoes I had'，'bought on a bottle'应为'bought on a website'，这里需要用过去时态'bought'，表达过去买鞋的经历。

× Maybe CN¥200 to CN¥1000 a month. I guess I seldom to come to come to count the cost on how much.

✓ Maybe CN¥200 to CN¥1000 a month. I guess I seldom count the cost of how much.

'seldom to come to come to count'结构错误，应该用动词原形'count'，且不需要不定式'to'，表达频率副词后直接接动词原形。

× Why 'cause that, 'cause I think that. We have to wear wear shoes every day.

✓ Because I think that we have to wear shoes every day.

'Why 'cause that, 'cause I think that.'句子不完整且重复，应该用连词'because'引导原因状语从句，避免重复和断句错误。

× So comfortable shoes. Oh make me feel comfort.

✓ So comfortable shoes make me feel comfortable.

'Oh make me feel comfort'中'comfort'应为形容词'comfortable'，用来修饰感受，表达穿鞋的舒适感。