Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness and clarity. For example, "rather by than buying money pairs" is unclear and likely a mistake. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Keep your sentences concise and correct.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy new shoes two or three times a year, mainly when my old ones wear out or I need shoes for a special occasion. I prefer comfort and quality over buying cheap pairs.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there is a small vocabulary mistake: "the feed can be different" should be "the fit can be different." Also, try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to improve coherence. Avoid minor errors to make your answer more natural.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online a few times. It's quite convenient because there are many options and sometimes better prices. However, I usually check the size guide and reviews carefully because the fit can be different from buying shoes in a physical store.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "on every size" and the sentence starting with "Spend" which lacks a subject. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your points. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, around 3000 to 5000 taka per pair. This is because I prefer durable and comfortable shoes rather than very cheap ones.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there is a small mistake: "long house" should be "long hours." Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "however" effectively to improve coherence. Avoid minor errors to sound more natural.

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I wear shoes for long hours every day. However, I try to choose shoes that are both comfortable and reasonably stylish.

× I prefer comfort and quality rather by than buying money pairs.

✓ I prefer comfort and quality rather than buying many pairs.

The phrase 'rather by than buying money pairs' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'rather than buying many pairs'. 'Many' is the correct quantifier for countable nouns like 'pairs', and 'rather than' is the correct conjunction to express preference.

× However, I usually check the size guide and reviews carefully as the feed can be different from buying shoes in a physical store.

✓ However, I usually check the size guide and reviews carefully as the fit can be different from buying shoes in a physical store.

The word 'feed' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'fit', which refers to how well the shoes suit the foot. This is a common confusion between similar sounding words.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes on every size.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes of every size.

The preposition 'on' before 'every size' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the range or category of sizes.

× Spend around 3000 to 5000 taka per pair because I prefer durable and comfortable shoes rather than very cheap ones.

✓ I spend around 3000 to 5000 taka per pair because I prefer durable and comfortable shoes rather than very cheap ones.

The original sentence lacks a subject 'I' at the beginning, making it incomplete. Adding 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Comfort is more important to me because I wear shoes for long house every day.

✓ Comfort is more important to me because I wear shoes for long hours every day.

The word 'house' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'hours' to indicate duration of time.