Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammar mistakes, incomplete sentences and repetition. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, start with "Yes, I enjoy buying shoes," then specify types and frequency, using linking words like "because" or "and".

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially training and weightlifting shoes, because they are more comfortable and support my workouts. I usually buy new pairs twice a year when my shoes get worn out or I need better support.

提案: The answer is understandable but has serious grammar and clarity problems and ends abruptly. Use the past simple correctly, name the app clearly, and add one short detail (e.g., why you chose online). Use linking words such as "because" or "so."

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online twice using the Namche app. I ordered a pair of running shoes and a pair of powerlifting shoes because it was more convenient and there was a good price.

提案: Your message is relevant but numbers and units are unclear and grammar is weak. Give a clear topic sentence about your typical budget, use correct number expressions, and explain briefly why. Keep it concise and coherent.

例: I don't spend much on shoes — usually around 300 riyals for a good pair that lasts me a year. So I typically spend about 300–600 riyals on shoes each year.

提案: The answer states the preference but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear sentence stating the preference (comfortable shoes), then give one specific reason and a brief example. Use linking words such as "because" and avoid repeating phrases.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes, especially for running, because they have good cushioning inside that protects my feet. For example, I choose shoes with a soft midsole to prevent pain during long runs.

× Yes, I like buy shoes like training shoes and bowl lifting shoes like that because they give me more comfortable and.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes, such as training shoes and bowling/weightlifting shoes, because they make me more comfortable.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing preferences. Also 'bowl lifting' is unclear; likely 'bowling' or 'weightlifting'. 'Give me more comfortable' is incorrect: use 'make me more comfortable' or 'are more comfortable'. Suggestion: use 'I like buying...' and 'they make me more comfortable.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, twice when I buy a shoes from Namche applications, shoes for running and another shoes for powerlifting. She overflowed and.

✓ Yes, twice; I bought shoes from Namche application: one for running and another for powerlifting.

The sentence reports past events, so the past tense of 'buy' (bought) is required. Also 'a shoes' is wrong: use 'a pair of shoes' or 'shoes'. 'Applications' should be singular 'application' if referring to one app. The fragment 'She overflowed and' is unclear and likely extraneous; remove or clarify. Suggestion: use 'I bought' and correct noun phrases to 'one pair for running and another for powerlifting.' Grammar problem type ID:9

× I don't spend so much money because the good one like 300 reals it's enough for a whole year and I spend like 6 a hundred real for one year.

✓ I don't spend much money because a good pair that costs around 300 riyals is enough for a whole year, and I spend about 600 riyals per year.

Errors: 'the good one' should be 'a good pair' (singular/plural and article). Currency 'reals' should be 'riyals' (spelling) and number phrasing '6 a hundred real' is incorrect; write 'about 600 riyals'. Also 'so much' is acceptable but 'much' fits better here. Suggestion: use 'a good pair' and standard number format 'about 600 riyals.' Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer for running shoes because they make for a good and comfortable mat in the shoes like inside the shoes and they give you more comfortable and.

✓ I prefer running shoes because they have good, comfortable insoles that make the inside of the shoe comfortable.

'Prefer for running shoes' is incorrect; use 'prefer running shoes' or 'prefer shoes for running.' 'Make for a good and comfortable mat in the shoes' is awkward: use 'have good, comfortable insoles' or 'provide good cushioning inside the shoe.' 'Give you more comfortable' should be 'make you more comfortable' or 'make the shoe comfortable.' Suggestion: use 'prefer running shoes' and refer to 'insoles' or 'cushioning' with 'make the shoe comfortable.' Grammar problem type ID:11}]}-------------</ReportGrammarArguments>