Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题。避免口语化的“Nope”，并且时间表达应准确（例如：every three months 或 once every three months）。可以用一到两句说明频率的原因。注意句子不要超过五句。

例: I don’t buy shoes very often; I usually buy a new pair once every three months because my old shoes wear out quickly. For example, I walk a lot for work, so I need durable footwear.

提案: 语法和用词需要改进，避免重复“because”。应给出更具体的原因并用连词连接。使用正确的动词短语（buy shoes online, fit me）。可以补充一个短例子说明担心尺码或试穿的问题。

例: No, I haven’t bought shoes online because I find it difficult to judge the fit without trying them on. For instance, sizes often vary between brands, so I prefer to try shoes in a store.

提案: 句子结构和用词要正确。不要用‘I cost’来表达花费，应说‘I usually spend’并直接给出具体数额。可以补充一点原因或类别（casual, sports）来丰富内容。

例: I usually spend about CN¥300 on a pair of shoes because I prefer mid-range quality. For example, I pay more for sports shoes but less for simple slippers.

提案: 回答总体清晰但语法和连贯性需改进。合并短句，避免重复单词（Comfort.）。用连接词（because, so）并给出更具体的原因或对比。注意价格表达要自然（more expensive than comfortable → more expensive than comfortable ones）。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I value my physical health and need support for long periods of standing. For example, I work on my feet all day, so I choose shoes with good cushioning rather than fashionable heels.

× Nope. Actually, I buy shoes three months every three months.

✓ No. Actually, I buy shoes every three months.

句子中“three months every three months”是重复且不符合英语习惯。应使用固定习语“every three months”表示“每三个月一次”。同时将“Nope”改为更正式的“No”。建议：用固定时间短语，如"every week/month/year"来表示频率。

× No, because I think purchase shoes online is not convenient because I should make sure the shoes are suit for me.

✓ No, because I think purchasing shoes online is not convenient as I should make sure the shoes suit me.

句中需要使用动名词作主语或宾语，因此“purchase”应改为动名词“purchasing”。另外，“the shoes are suit for me”中“suit”应为动词，结构为主语+动词+宾语，不能用“be + suit”。因此改为“the shoes suit me”。建议：动词后若作名词用-ing形式；“suit”作动词时直接跟宾语。

× Ah, actually for me I always cost CN¥300 for a pair of shoes.

✓ Ah, actually I usually spend CN¥300 on a pair of shoes.

这里使用了错误的动词“cost”且句子结构不自然。应使用动词“spend”来表示花费，并用副词“usually”表示频率，介词用“on”表示在……上花费。建议：用“spend + amount + on + thing”。

× For me, I prefer comfortable shoes because I focus on my physical health and comfort. Comfort.

✓ For me, I prefer comfortable shoes because I focus on my physical health and comfort.

原句在句尾重复了“Comfort.”造成冗余，且动词时态无误。删除多余单词即可。建议：避免重复同一词语，使表达简洁。

× For example, I often stand or working for a long time and sometimes the fashionable shoes may more expensive than comfortable.

✓ For example, I often stand or work for a long time, and sometimes fashionable shoes may be more expensive than comfortable ones.

句中并列动词需保持一致，原句用“stand or working”不一致，应改为“stand or work”。另外比较结构缺少系动词“be”，应为“may be more expensive”。最后“comfortable”作为名词使用不当，需改为“comfortable ones”或“comfortable shoes”。建议：并列结构中的动词形式一致；比较级前加系动词；形容词替代名词时用“ones”补足。