Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes I do, but not excessively. I enjoy choosing shoes that fit different occasions, especially ones that are practical but still stylish.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes, quite often, actually. Most of the shoes that I own were bought online because there's much wider selection than in the physical stores and it's easier to compare prices and styles.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
I usually keep it under €100. In the long run I don't think spending a lot on shoes is necessary since they wear out eventually.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
I'd definitely go for comfort. Comfortable shoes are more practical for everyday life, whereas fashionable shoes are mostly for special occasions.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 88.0提案: Sehr gut strukturiert und natürlich geantwortet. Um die Antwort zu verbessern, geben Sie ein konkretes Beispiel und benutzen Sie ein verbindendes Wort, um die Gründe klarer zu machen (z. B. "for example", "because"). Halten Sie die Antwort kurz (max. 3–4 Sätze).
例: Yes, I do, but not excessively. I buy shoes occasionally for different occasions, because I prefer practical yet stylish pairs. For example, I recently bought a pair of low-heeled boots that are smart enough for work but comfortable for walking.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 90.0提案: Antwort ist natürlich und informativ. Verbessern Sie die Kohärenz durch ein verbindendes Wort und fügen Sie ein kurzes konkretes Beispiel oder eine Folge hinzu (z. B. "so" oder "therefore"). Vermeiden Sie Wiederholungen wie "online" und "physical stores" in einem Satz ohne Variation.
例: Yes, quite often. I buy most of my shoes online because there is a much wider selection, so I can compare prices and styles easily. For example, I recently found running trainers from three brands and compared reviews before choosing one.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 84.0提案: Gute, prägnante Antwort. Um den Eindruck zu verbessern, geben Sie einen Grund mit einem verbindenden Wort und ein konkretes Beispiel oder Ausnahme (z. B. für besondere Anlässe). Vermeiden Sie zu allgemeine Aussagen; konkretisieren Sie "in the long run".
例: I usually keep it under €100 because shoes tend to wear out over time. However, if I need formal shoes for a special event, I might spend more for better quality and durability.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 92.0提案: Sehr klare, natürliche Antwort mit gutem Gegensatz. Um noch besser zu werden, fügen Sie ein kurzes Beispiel hinzu und verwenden Sie ein verbindendes Wort (z. B. "because" oder "so") um die Begründung zu stärken.
例: I'd definitely go for comfort because I walk a lot every day. For example, I choose cushioned sneakers for daily wear and reserve fashionable heels for parties or weddings.
文法
× Most of the shoes that I own were bought online because there's much wider selection than in the physical stores and it's easier to compare prices and styles.
✓ Most of the shoes that I own were bought online because there’s a much wider selection than in physical stores and it’s easier to compare prices and styles.
The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement and article omission issue: 'there's much wider selection' uses 'there's' (there is) with a plural concept 'selection' that requires 'a' before 'much wider selection' or 'a much wider selection' to be grammatical. Also 'the physical stores' is better as 'physical stores' in this general statement. Correction adds the article 'a' before 'much wider selection' and removes the unnecessary definite article before 'physical stores'. Suggestions: include appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') with singular countable nouns and avoid using 'there's' informally with noun phrases that need articles; use 'there is a' + singular noun or 'there are' + plural noun.
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