Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。避免重复“to be honest”并修正语法错误（如代词与名词一致）。可以先给出一个简洁的主题句说明是否喜欢，然后用一到两句支持细节并用连接词衔接。

例: I don’t really enjoy buying shoes; I usually buy new pairs about every three months. However, I often shop online for convenience, and I find returning ill-fitting items quite troublesome, which is why I’m not a big fan of the process.

提案: 回答要用正确的时态和表达（例如说“Yes, I have”或“Yes, I often buy shoes online”）。避免句子未完结，注意主谓一致和连词使用。用连接词（because, so, and）使句子更连贯，并给出具体例子说明便利或折扣。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it’s more convenient than going to shopping malls. For example, I can compare styles and prices quickly, and I frequently find discounts or free shipping.

提案: 回答中数额很可能不合逻辑（CN¥5过低），要确认数字合理并表达清楚动机。避免口头填充词（Uh）和重复“to be honest”。用一两句解释为何愿意花更多或更少的钱，并用连接词衔接原因和结果。

例: I usually spend around CN¥500 on a good pair of shoes because I believe paying more for quality means they will last longer, which ultimately saves me money in the long run.

提案: 回答结构良好但注意语法细节（例如“prefer to wear”或“prefer wearing”），并可用连接词（however, when）使对比更清晰。用一两句具体例子说明何时选择哪种鞋。

例: It depends. If I want to take stylish photos or attend a special event, I prefer to wear fashionable shoes. However, for everyday activities and long walks I always choose comfortable shoes, like sneakers, because they support my feet.

× I always buy shoes every three months, but to be honest, I don't like buying shoes because I think it is very troublesome. Because when I buy it online I usually need to return them.

✓ I always buy shoes every three months, but to be honest, I don't like buying shoes because I think it is very troublesome. When I buy them online I usually need to return them.

问题类型：动词+ -ing 以及代词使用混合造成句子重复和代词不一致。“Because”引导的从句不应单独成句，且前后代词需一致。建议将两个句子合并并把“it”改为与复数“shoes”一致的“them”。此外，保持“buying shoes”结构不变。

× Yes, I have ever bought shoes online. To be honest I always buy them online because it is more convenient than buy it in shopping mall and sometimes you can find some discount and.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online. To be honest, I usually buy them online because it is more convenient than buying them in a shopping mall, and sometimes you can find discounts.

问题类型：副词/时态搭配和动词+ -ing 以及冠词和代词使用不当。1) “have ever bought”在肯定句中不需要“ever”，改为“have bought”。2) 对比结构中应使用动名词“buying”而非不定式“buy”。3) “it”应改为复数代词“them”，并在“shopping mall”前加不定冠词“a”。4) 句末残缺“and”后需补完整内容或删除，此处改为复数名词“discounts”。建议使用“usually”替换“always”以更自然。

× Uh, to be honest I always spend about CN¥5 to buy my shoes because I think if I pay for quality I will use the shoes longer and it's a good way to save my money.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I usually spend about CN¥500 to buy my shoes because I think if I pay for quality I will use the shoes longer and it's a good way to save money.

问题类型：现在时及量词使用不当。1) 数额“CN¥5”与常识不符，应为更合理的数额（假设为CN¥500）或根据说话者实际修改。2) “always”改为“usually”更符合频率副词搭配。3) “save my money”中“my”可省略或改为“money”。建议根据实际情况调整数额并使用自然的频率副词。

× Well, it depends. If I want to take some beautiful photos, I prefer wear fashionable shoes. But in my daily life I always wear comfortable shoes because I always need to walk for a long time.

✓ Well, it depends. If I want to take some beautiful photos, I prefer to wear fashionable shoes. But in my daily life I always wear comfortable shoes because I often need to walk for a long time.

问题类型：动词不定式与副词使用错误。1) 动词“prefer”后须接不定式或动名词，这里用不定式“to wear”。2) 第二处“always need to walk for a long time”用词重复且频率词过多，将第二个“always”改为“often”更自然。建议记住动词搭配（prefer to do / prefer doing）并避免重复频率副词。