Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答過於簡短，缺乏主題句和細節。應先直接回答問題，再用1–2句補充頻率和原因或例子，並使用連接詞使語意流暢。例如說明你多常買鞋、在哪裡買或買鞋的動機。

例: Yes, I do like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes every few months because I walk a lot and need comfortable pairs. Also, I enjoy browsing stores on weekends to find new styles.

提案: 時態和用詞不準確（問過去經驗應用過去式或現在完成式），內容也太簡短。應用一個主題句回答，再補充過去經驗、頻率或對比線上與線下購買的看法，並用連接詞銜接句子。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. For example, I often order running shoes from an international website because they have more choices and better prices, although I sometimes worry about fit.

提案: 回答具體但缺乏背景說明與連貫性。可以保留金額作為主題句，接著說明為何花這個數額（例如工作需求、興趣或品質），並使用連接詞如 because 或 since 增強邏輯。注意表達貨幣時可說 "around" 或 "about" 並可改為每年/每雙等更自然的單位。

例: I usually spend around CN¥1000 per month on shoes because I need several pairs for work and exercise. Since I walk a lot, I prefer buying high-quality shoes that last longer.

提案: 回答明確但過於簡短，缺少理由或例子。應先給出立場，然後用一兩句解釋原因、比較兩者並可能給出一個例子，使用連接詞如 although 或 because 來連接觀點與原因。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I like to express my personal style. Although comfort is important, I usually choose stylish designs for social events and reserve comfortable shoes for long walks.

× Student: Yes.

✓ Student: Yes, I do.

原句“Yes.”虽然口语中可接受，但在回答“Do you like buying shoes? How often?”时，完整回答应与助动词一致，使用“Yes, I do.”更清晰地回应疑问句的时态和结构。建议在正式答题时把简短回答扩展为完整句子以避免不明确。

× Student: Yes, I do.

✓ Student: Yes, I have.

问题为“Have you ever bought shoes online?”使用现在完成时（have + 过去分词）。学生原句“Yes, I do.”使用的是一般现在时，时态不匹配。应改为“Yes, I have.”来正确回答现在完成时的问句。

× Student: I usually spend about CN¥1000 per month.

✓ Student: I usually spend about CN¥1000 on shoes per month.

原句大体正确，但略显不明确。问题询问“How much money do you usually spend on shoes?”应在句中明确“on shoes”。没有语法错误的核心类别是时态使用，仍为一般现在时，适合表示习惯，因此仅补充介词短语以保持语义清晰。解释：在回答特定对象的花费时，应明确指出花费对象，避免歧义。

× Student: I prefer fashionable shoes.

✓ Student: I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable ones.

问题为“Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?”直接回答“I prefer fashionable shoes.”虽然可接受，但比较结构更完整的回答应使用“prefer A to B”形式："I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable ones."。这里属于时态与比较结构使用的改进，建议在正式回答中使用完整比较句以清楚表明偏好。