Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatical, concise and directly answer the question with a clear time frame. Start with a topic sentence (yes/no and frequency), then add one brief reason. Use linking words if adding details. Aim for 2–3 short sentences (max 5).

例: I don't really like buying shoes, so I only buy new pairs about once a year. Because my shoes usually last a long time, I wait until they are worn out before replacing them.

提案: Answer directly and clearly, then give a concise reason. Correct the tense and prepositions (e.g., 'bought online', 'because my feet are wide'). Use one linking phrase such as 'because' or 'so' to connect reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: No, I haven't bought shoes online. I buy skates online, but I avoid buying shoes that way because my feet are quite wide and I need to try them on to make sure they fit.

提案: Give a clear amount and a short explanation. Avoid hesitations and unclear words. Use appropriate currency and phrasing (e.g., 'I spend about X' or 'I usually spend around X on shoes'). One or two sentences are enough.

例: I don't spend much on shoes; I usually spend around 30 to 50 dollars (or your local currency) on a pair. I prefer affordable brands because I only buy shoes once a year.

提案: State your preference clearly, then give a specific reason. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer comfortable shoes because I had foot surgery'). Use one linking phrase like 'because' and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I had foot surgery and need good support. For example, I often choose cushioned trainers rather than fashionable high heels because they are gentler on my feet.

× I'm not really like to buy shoes so I.

✓ I don't really like buying shoes.

This sentence uses the wrong verb form after 'really' and has an incomplete clause. Use the auxiliary do for negative present simple (I don't like) and use the gerund 'buying' to talk about the activity in general. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically complete.

× Usually buy my shoes like.

✓ I usually buy shoes once a year.

The original phrase is fragmented and the adverb placement is awkward. 'Usually' should come before the verb, and include a frequency phrase ('once a year') to complete the idea. This makes a full, clear sentence.

× One year's term.

✓ Once every year.

This fragment is not a complete sentence and uses an unnatural phrase. Replace it with a full adverbial phrase 'once every year' to indicate frequency in present tense.

× No I haven't I have bought my skates in online, but I haven't bought my shoes because my foot is a little bit wide.

✓ No, I haven't. I have bought my skates online, but I haven't bought my shoes because my feet are a little wide.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence and incorrect preposition 'in online' (use 'online'), and singular 'foot' when referring generally to both feet (use 'feet'). Also separate two ideas into sentences and keep present perfect for past experiences. Use commas and periods appropriately.

× So uh, I have to wear it and buy.

✓ So I have to try them on before I buy shoes.

Original is unclear: 'wear it and buy' is vague and uses singular 'it'. Use plural 'them' for shoes' fit and a clear structure 'try them on before I buy' to express the intended meaning.

× Uh, I don't usually spend a lot of money in shoes, so maybe she 10 million. All later.

✓ I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes; maybe about 10 million (local currency) later.

Use preposition 'on' with 'spend money on'. The original 'she 10 million. All later.' is unclear; replace with 'maybe about 10 million' and indicate currency or context. Ensure punctuation separates clauses. If '10 million' is intended as an annual or total amount, specify 'per year' or 'in total' for clarity.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I have bought one, but I usually wear comfortable shoes because my I have got surgery before my my feet.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually wear them; I had surgery on my feet before.

The original repeats ideas and mixes tenses awkwardly. Use present simple 'I prefer' and 'I usually wear them' for habitual actions. Use past simple 'I had surgery' to describe a completed action in the past, and 'on my feet' as the correct prepositional phrase. Remove duplicated words and clarify pronouns ('them' for shoes).