Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, my school has several rules, especially during exams. For example, we are not allowed to use our phones in class because they can distract students and affect their concentration.

提案: Bạn cần tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa và nói lắp. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I believe that having more rules would help students focus better and reduce distractions during lessons.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn bị ngắt quãng và thiếu cụ thể. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về giáo viên đó và cách họ giúp bạn, đồng thời tránh nói lắp.

例: Yes, I have a teacher who performs exceptionally well. She has inspired me a lot by helping me improve my knowledge and skills in the subject.

× Yes, my school has several rules for students for exam.

✓ Yes, my school has several rules for students during exams.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before 'exam'. The correct preposition to indicate the time or occasion is 'during'.

× We are not allowed to use our phones during class because they can be very distracting and prevent ills for focusing on or on all students.

✓ We are not allowed to use our phones during class because they can be very distracting and prevent us from focusing.

The phrase 'prevent ills for focusing on or on all students' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'prevent us from focusing'. The pronoun 'us' correctly refers to the students, and the preposition 'from' is used after 'prevent'.

× Uh, yes. If there are several rules, uh, the children will focus, not and uh, when, uh, and not distract it distract.

✓ Uh, yes. If there are several rules, the children will focus and not get distracted.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and verb forms to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I have a teacher who performs exceptionally well and has inspired me a lot of, uh, a teacher who's helps me, uh, advance knowledge and, uh, improve my.

✓ I have a teacher who performs exceptionally well and has inspired me a lot, a teacher who helps me advance my knowledge and improve myself.

The phrase 'a teacher who's helps me' is incorrect; 'who helps me' is correct. Also, 'advance knowledge and improve my' is incomplete; it should be 'advance my knowledge and improve myself' to be grammatically correct and meaningful.