Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать ошибок, таких как "in our school has" и использовать связующие слова для плавности. Также стоит уточнить правила более конкретно.

例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For instance, students must wear the school uniform, and girls are not allowed to wear makeup. These rules help maintain discipline and a focused learning environment.

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать связующие слова и объяснить причину более подробно, чтобы сделать ответ более убедительным.

例: I don't think having more rules would benefit students. In my opinion, too many rules can make students feel restricted and may not help them become smarter or more clever.

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и избегать излишних комментариев о внешности, которые не связаны с профессиональными качествами. Следует использовать связующие слова для плавности и конкретизировать, почему учитель хорош.

例: Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well. She is very knowledgeable and explains the lessons clearly, which helps me understand the subject better.

× Yes, in our school has a lot of rules for students.

✓ Yes, in our school there are a lot of rules for students.

The sentence is missing the verb 'there are' to indicate existence. In English, to express that something exists in a place, we use 'there is' or 'there are' depending on singular or plural. Here, 'rules' is plural, so 'there are' is correct.

× we don't need to wear other clothes from our uniform

✓ we don't need to wear clothes other than our uniform

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression to indicate exclusion or difference is 'other than'. So, 'wear clothes other than our uniform' is the proper phrase.

× we don't need to wear other clothes from our uniform and the girls don't need to put on makeup.

✓ we don't have to wear other clothes than our uniform and the girls don't have to put on makeup.

The phrase 'don't need to' is less common and can be replaced with 'don't have to' to express absence of obligation more naturally in English.

× Well, I think no, because if rules would be more, the students wouldn't be smarter and clever.

✓ Well, I think no, because if there were more rules, the students wouldn't be smarter or clever.

In conditional sentences expressing unreal situations, the past subjunctive 'were' is used instead of 'would be' in the 'if' clause. Also, 'would be more' is incorrect; it should be 'there were more rules'. Additionally, 'and' should be 'or' when negating qualities.

× It's a English teacher.

✓ It's an English teacher.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a word starting with a vowel sound. 'English' starts with a vowel sound, so the correct article is 'an'.