Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa, motto shizen de, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, 'Yes, students must wear uniforms and follow other important rules to maintain discipline.' to iu fuu ni, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunshou wa saisho wa sakete, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

例: Yes, students at my school have to wear uniforms every day. Besides that, there are rules about being punctual and respecting teachers to keep the school environment good.

提案: Kotae no naka de, 'uh' ya 'so' nado no fukuzatsu na kotoba ga ooi node, motto shizen de, meikaku ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Mata, riyuu o teinei ni setsumei shi, rensetsu-go o tsukatte hanashikata o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai.

例: I don't think more rules are helpful because too many rules can make students feel stressed and less motivated to study. Therefore, having a few clear rules is better.

提案: Kono kotae wa rikai ga muzukashikute, shizen de chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete imasen. Motto meikaku ni, shitsumon ni taishite kotae, shiji sareta bunpou to tango o tsukatte hanashite kudasai.

例: Yes, I have a teacher who is very kind and explains lessons clearly. She helps students when they have problems and makes classes interesting.

× It's a kind of strict rules in the schools, yes.

✓ It's a kind of strict rule in the school, yes.

The phrase 'a kind of' should be followed by a singular noun, so 'rules' should be changed to 'rule'. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context.

× the, a great deal of rules, uh, sometimes discourage, uh, the students from studying or going, uh, to their schools.

✓ a great deal of rules sometimes discourage the students from studying or going to their school.

The phrase 'a great deal of' is usually used with uncountable nouns, but 'rules' is countable plural. It would be better to say 'a great number of rules' or 'many rules'. However, since the instruction is to correct only based on the given grammar problem types, this is a singular/plural issue. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context.

× What's my name is so they're tasting eating food, but I need a lot of my stuff and they sometimes feel like that. I know it's still.

✓ I don't understand the question, but I need a lot of my stuff and sometimes they feel like that. I know it's still.

The original sentence is unclear and does not form a proper sentence structure. The correction attempts to make it more coherent, but the original meaning is ambiguous. The error is a sentence structure error.