Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не совсем естественен. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более чётко выражать мысли, избегая двусмысленности.

例: Yes, there are some rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to sleep in the main hall, and swearing is strictly prohibited because teachers do not want to hear bad language.

提案: Ваш ответ звучит неестественно и содержит лишние слова. Следует формулировать мысли более ясно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: No, I don't think more rules would help students. In my opinion, students tend to break rules anyway, so adding more wouldn't make much difference.

提案: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и добавить больше деталей, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным и естественным.

例: Yes, I have had a dedicated teacher, but it was a difficult experience because he was very strict and created his own rules, which made many students unhappy.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные слова и более формальный стиль, избегая разговорных сокращений.

例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I believe rules are often broken, and usually, the only consequence is punishment.

× At least our teachers doesn't mean to hear that.

✓ At least our teachers don't mean to hear that.

The subject 'teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number.

× No, I completely disagree in this agreement with this statement because, uh, there are no rules that cannot be broken by students and we will do it.

✓ No, I completely disagree with this statement because, uh, there are no rules that cannot be broken by students and we will do it.

The correct phrase is 'disagree with' not 'disagree in'. The preposition 'with' is used to express opposition to a statement.

× Yes, and it was a dreadful experience because he was too strict and he was making his own rules that all of us hated.

✓ Yes, and it was a dreadful experience because he was too strict and he made his own rules that all of us hated.

The past continuous 'was making' is less appropriate here; simple past 'made' is better to describe completed actions in the past.

× I'd like to have fewer rolls at school because rules were meant for us to break em and the only counts that we have in there is that we're getting a punishment.

✓ I'd like to have fewer rules at school because rules were meant for us to break them and the only consequence that we have is that we're getting a punishment.

'Rolls' should be 'rules' to match the context. 'Em' is informal and should be 'them'. 'Counts' is incorrect here; 'consequence' fits better. Also, 'is' agrees with singular 'consequence'.