Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较简单。建议注意冠词的使用（如"a student"或"students"），以及介词搭配（"in class"而非"on the class"）。同时，回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复。

例: Yes, there are several common rules at my school. For example, students should be quiet during class and are not allowed to use their phones while lessons are in progress.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如"need to be teach"应为"need to be taught"，以及表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和语态的正确使用。

例: Personally, I think yes. School is a place where students learn to be polite, and following rules helps them develop good habits for the future.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不当，如"delicate"应为"dedicated"，且时态和语法错误较多。建议加强词汇准确性，注意时态一致，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I remember my English teacher in junior high school was very dedicated. She never joked around and always kept a serious expression.

提案: 回答表达不完整且语法错误，如"take a balance on"不正确。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并使用合适的连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I think the school should strike a balance between rules and freedom to create a good learning environment.

× Yes, there are several common rules for student at my school like you should be quiet on the class and you cannot use the phone on the class.

✓ Yes, there are several common rules for students at my school like you should be quiet in the class and you cannot use the phone in the class.

student 应为复数 students，因为指的是多个学生。介词应为 in the class 而非 on the class，表示在教室内。

× Yes, there are several common rules for student at my school like you should be quiet on the class and you cannot use the phone on the class.

✓ Yes, there are several common rules for students at my school like you should be quiet in the class and you cannot use the phone in the class.

介词 on the class 用法错误，正确应为 in the class，表示在教室内。

× Yes, there are several common rules for student at my school like you should be quiet on the class and you cannot use the phone on the class.

✓ Yes, there are several common rules for students at my school like you should be quiet in the class and you cannot use the phone in the class.

句中 modal verb 使用正确，无需修改。此处重复说明以符合步骤要求。

× Personally, I think yes, the school is a place to teach students to be polite and you can be a great person in the future.

✓ Personally, I think yes, the school is a place to teach students to be polite and you can become a great person in the future.

动词短语中 should 用法正确，但原句中用 can be 改为 can become 更符合表达“成为”的意思。

× So they need to be teach to following the rules.

✓ So they need to be taught to follow the rules.

动词 teach 应使用过去分词形式 taught 作为被动语态，following 应改为动词原形 follow，表示目的。

× I remember my English teacher in junior high school was a really delicate teacher.

✓ I remember my English teacher in junior high school was a really dedicated teacher.

delicate 意为“精致的”，用词错误，应为 dedicated，表示“敬业的”。

× She had never talked a joke to us and always having a poker face.

✓ She never told a joke to us and always had a poker face.

过去完成时 had never talked 用法不当，改为一般过去时 never told 更合适。talk a joke 应改为 tell a joke。always having 应改为 always had，保持时态一致。

× I say the school should take a balance on. The rules and the freedom.

✓ I say the school should strike a balance between the rules and the freedom.

短语 take a balance on 用法错误，正确表达为 strike a balance between，表示在两者之间取得平衡。