Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如时间表达混乱，且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的时间表达，并且简洁明了地说明规则。

例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to leave the campus between 9 PM and 6 AM.

提案: 回答中有严重的语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰，且内容缺乏逻辑。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并举出具体合理的例子。

例: No, I don't think more rules would help students. Some rules, like turning off electricity at 11 PM, are unreasonable and make life difficult.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“encountered a lot of dedicated teacher”应为“encountered many dedicated teachers”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式，表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have. During high school, I had a dedicated math teacher who often helped me by answering my questions after class.

提案: 回答中存在严重的语法和词汇错误，句子毫无意义。建议使用简单句表达自己的观点，并举出具体例子支持。

例: I prefer fewer rules at school because it allows me more freedom. For example, I can go on trips without needing permission from teachers.

× we are prohibited to get out between 12:00 and 9:00 to 6:00 AM.

✓ we are prohibited from going out between 9:00 PM and 6:00 AM.

动词prohibit后应接介词from加动名词形式，不能直接接不定式。这里应使用'prohibited from going out'。另外，时间表达应清晰，'between 9:00 PM and 6:00 AM'更符合习惯。

× No, I don't think student will benefit more from a rose before.

✓ No, I don't think students will benefit more from more rules.

student应使用复数students，因为指的是一般学生群体。原句中的'a rose before'不合语境，应改为'more rules'。

× Some rules are not beautiful children.

✓ Some rules are not good for children.

beautiful children意思是漂亮的孩子，语义错误。应表达规则对孩子不利，故改为'not good for children'。

× For example, the electricity will be well off at 11:00 PM.

✓ For example, the electricity will be cut off at 11:00 PM.

electricity前不需要定冠词the，且表达断电应使用'cut off'，'well off'用法错误。

× I have encountered a lot of dedicated teacher such in my high school times.

✓ I have encountered a lot of dedicated teachers during my high school years.

teacher应使用复数teachers，'such in my high school times'表达不正确，改为'during my high school years'更自然。

× I have a dedicated math teacher.

✓ I have a dedicated math teacher.

此句无语法错误，保持不变。

× They often ask my question after class or after school.

✓ They often ask me questions after class or after school.

ask后应接宾格代词me，且questions应为复数，表示多次提问。

× I prefer to swallowed furrows before selling free, so I will do what I want to.

✓ I prefer to have more freedom, so I will do what I want to.

原句词语搭配错误，'swallowed furrows before selling free'无意义，改为表达'更自由'的'I prefer to have more freedom'。

× For example, if I want to have a trip, I don't need to get permission of tutors.

✓ For example, if I want to take a trip, I don't need to get permission from tutors.

动词take搭配trip更合适，permission后应接介词from而非of。