Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız genel olarak iyi, ancak "during lesson" ifadesi yerine "during lessons" kullanmanız daha doğal olur. Ayrıca, "helps understand the material better" ifadesini "helps us understand the material better" şeklinde tamamlamak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapar. Cümlelerinizde bağlaç kullanarak ifadelerinizi daha tutarlı hale getirebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must listen carefully to their teachers during lessons because it helps us understand the material better. Also, we have to wear school uniforms, which provide equality among students and reduce distractions.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı cümleler tam olarak tamamlanmamış gibi görünüyor, örneğin "rules about punctuality and classroom behavior and culture, responsibility and respect among students" ifadesi daha açık ve tamamlanmış olmalı. Ayrıca, "students creativity" yerine "students' creativity" kullanmalısınız. Bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlelerinizin akıcılığını artırabilirsiniz.

例: I believe that having more rules for students can be beneficial to a certain extent because they help maintain discipline and create a structured learning environment, which is essential for academic success. For instance, rules about punctuality, classroom behavior, responsibility, and respect among students are important. However, too many rules might restrict students' creativity and freedom, so it's important to find a balance that promotes independence.

提案: Cevabınızda "help his students succeed" ifadesi "help his students to succeed" veya "help his students succeed" şeklinde olmalı. Ayrıca "Madame Physic" ifadesi muhtemelen "Physics" olmalı. Cümlelerinizde daha doğru kelime seçimi ve dilbilgisi kullanarak ifadelerinizi güçlendirebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated physics teacher who was truly committed to helping his students succeed. He encouraged me to work hard on difficult subjects like physics by providing extra support and guidance. Moreover, he always made a dedicated study schedule with me, which really helped me improve my exam scores significantly.

提案: Cevabınızda "roles" kelimesi yerine "rules" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca "allows student to express" ifadesi "allows students to express" şeklinde çoğul olmalı. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve doğru kelimelerle ifade ederek anlamı güçlendirebilirsiniz.

例: It depends on the student, but I personally prefer having several rules at school because they allow students to express and develop their creativity more freely. When there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and less motivated to explore new ideas.

× students must listen carefully to their teacher during lesson because it helps understand the material better

✓ students must listen carefully to their teacher during the lesson because it helps them understand the material better

The verb 'helps' requires an object before the verb 'understand'. The sentence is missing the pronoun 'them' to correctly link the verb 'helps' with 'understand'. Also, 'during lesson' needs the definite article 'the' before 'lesson'.

× students must listen carefully to their teacher during lesson because it helps understand the material better

✓ students must listen carefully to their teacher during the lesson because it helps them understand the material better

The phrase 'during lesson' is missing the definite article 'the'. In English, 'lesson' is a countable noun and requires an article in this context.

× it helps understand the material better

✓ it helps them understand the material better

The verb 'helps' requires an object before the verb 'understand'. The pronoun 'them' is necessary to indicate who is helped to understand.

× which provide equality among students and reduce distractions

✓ which provides equality among students and reduces distractions

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'school uniforms' (plural), so the verbs should be plural: 'provide' and 'reduce'. However, 'school uniforms' is plural, so 'provide' and 'reduce' are correct. The original sentence is correct here, so no correction needed.

× which provide equality among students and reduce distractions

✓ which provide equality among students and reduce distractions

The subject 'school uniforms' is plural, so the verbs 'provide' and 'reduce' are correctly in plural form. No correction needed.

× For instance, rules about punctuality and classroom behavior and culture, responsibility and respect among students.

✓ For instance, rules about punctuality, classroom behavior and culture, responsibility, and respect among students.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb. Adding commas and restructuring the list improves clarity and sentence completeness.

× too many rules might restrict students creativity and freedom

✓ too many rules might restrict students' creativity and freedom

The possessive form 'students'' is required to show that creativity belongs to the students.

× who was truly committed to help his students succeed

✓ who was truly committed to helping his students succeed

After 'committed to', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form, so 'help' changes to 'helping'.

× He encouraged me to work hard on difficult subjects like Madame Physic by providing extra support and guidance.

✓ He encouraged me to work hard on difficult subjects like Madame Physics by providing extra support and guidance.

The subject name 'Madame Physic' seems incorrect; it should be 'Madame Physics' or 'Physics'. Also, 'work hard on' is correct preposition usage here.

× Moreover, he always made a dedicated study schedule with me, which really helped me to improve my exam score significantly.

✓ Moreover, he always made a dedicated study schedule with me, which really helped me improve my exam score significantly.

The verb 'helped' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to', so 'helped me improve' is correct.

× I personally prefer several roles at school because it allows student to express and develop their creativity more fairly.

✓ I personally prefer several rules at school because they allow students to express and develop their creativity more fairly.

'Roles' should be 'rules' as per context. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'rules'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject.

× When there are too many roles, students might feel restricted and less motivated to explore new ideas.

✓ When there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and less motivated to explore new ideas.

'Roles' should be 'rules' to match the context of school regulations.