Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Versuche, deine Antwort klarer und grammatikalisch korrekter zu formulieren. Vermeide Wiederholungen und achte auf die richtige Verwendung von Singular und Plural. Zum Beispiel solltest du sagen: "There are always rules, even at home. One important rule at my school is punctuality; if a student is late, they must come with their father."

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. One important rule is punctuality; if a student arrives late, they must come with their father. This helps maintain discipline and ensures students respect the schedule.

提案: Versuche, deine Gedanken klarer und strukturierter auszudrücken. Vermeide Füllwörter und unvollständige Sätze. Nutze Verbindungswörter, um deine Argumente logisch zu verbinden. Zum Beispiel: "Although students need freedom to practice what they learn, rules are important because they provide structure and guidance."

例: I believe that while students should have the freedom to explore their studies, having more rules can help them stay focused and disciplined, which ultimately benefits their learning process.

提案: Achte auf die richtige Grammatik und Satzstruktur. Vermeide Wiederholungen und formuliere vollständige Sätze. Zum Beispiel: "Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in primary school who taught us many valuable things and was very supportive."

例: Yes, in primary school I had a very dedicated teacher who taught us many important lessons and always encouraged us to do our best.

提案: Formuliere deine Meinung klar und benutze verbindende Wörter, um deine Argumente zu erklären. Vermeide Füllwörter und unklare Ausdrücke. Zum Beispiel: "I prefer having some rules because they help me stay disciplined and focused on my goals, but too many rules can be restrictive."

例: I prefer having a moderate number of rules at school because they help me stay disciplined and guide me towards my goals, but having too many rules can be overwhelming.

提案: Vermeide Wiederholungen und unvollständige Sätze. Erkläre deine Gedanken klar und benutze passende Wörter. Zum Beispiel: "Yes, I had a strict science teacher who was very intelligent. Although he was strict, he sometimes smiled to encourage us."

例: Yes, I had a strict science teacher who was very intelligent. Although he was strict, he sometimes smiled to encourage us and make the lessons more enjoyable.

提案: Formuliere deine Antwort klar und vermeide Wiederholungen. Zum Beispiel: "No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it is not my goal or dream."

例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I believe rules are important for effective teaching and learning, and it is not my career goal.

× Like any other places in the world, there is always rules.

✓ Like any other places in the world, there are always rules.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× And one of the most rules is to be on time because if you are not punctual and you don't come at time, you need to have your father with you.

✓ And one of the most important rules is to be on time because if you are not punctual and you don't come on time, you need to have your father with you.

The phrase 'most rules' is incorrect; it should be 'most important rules' or 'main rules'. Also, 'come at time' should be 'come on time' as the correct preposition is 'on' for time expressions.

× it's good that the student have the freedom to do a lot of things and to be free to, to practice what they, what they are studying.

✓ it's good that the students have the freedom to do a lot of things and to be free to practice what they are studying.

The subject 'students' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'student' should be plural to match 'they'.

× I had the chance to have a teacher like mine that have a lot of things teach teaching me.

✓ I had the chance to have a teacher like mine who had a lot of things to teach me.

The phrase 'have a lot of things teach teaching me' is incorrect. It should be 'had a lot of things to teach me' to use the infinitive form after 'things' and correct verb tense.

× She has a lot of things to give in to us as students.

✓ She has a lot of things to give to us as students.

The phrase 'give in to us' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' without 'in'.

× Not like a lot of rules, because that's not good too.

✓ Not too many rules, because that's not good either.

The phrase 'a lot of rules' is correct, but 'not like a lot of rules' is awkward. 'Not too many rules' is a better quantifier for negative statements. Also, 'too' should be 'either' in negative contexts.

× It gives me the chance to know the right paths to my goals with, uh, discipline and love other rules.

✓ It gives me the chance to know the right paths to my goals with, uh, discipline and love for other rules.

The phrase 'love other rules' is unclear and likely missing a preposition. Adding 'for' clarifies the meaning.

× We all have had the chance to to to get to know a teacher. A strict teacher.

✓ We all have had the chance to get to know a teacher, a strict teacher.

The repetition 'to to to' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'to'. Also, combining the two sentences improves clarity.

× He was genie and but he was so strict.

✓ He was genius, but he was so strict.

The word 'genie' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'genius'. Also, 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed.

× He tried to smile with you, but in the fact.

✓ He tried to smile at you, but in fact,

The phrase 'smile with you' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'in the fact' should be 'in fact'.

× No, no, not really. This is not one of my goals and not one of my my dreams too, to be a teacher in any other school type of school.

✓ No, no, not really. This is not one of my goals and not one of my dreams either, to be a teacher in any other type of school.

The phrase 'my my dreams' has a repeated word. Also, 'too' should be 'either' in negative contexts. 'Any other school type of school' is redundant; 'any other type of school' is correct.