Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, ví dụ như "My school has many rules to help students behave properly. For instance, we have to wear uniforms every day."

例: My school has many rules to help students behave properly. For instance, we have to wear uniforms every day.

提案: Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ: "On the one hand, rules help students behave properly and improve self-discipline. On the other hand, strict rules may limit freedom and creativity."

例: On the one hand, rules help students behave properly and improve self-discipline. On the other hand, strict rules may limit freedom and creativity.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ví dụ: "Definitely yes. My high school teacher not only taught me math but also cared about my mental health. Even now at university, she still calls to check on me."

例: Definitely yes. My high school teacher not only taught me math but also cared about my mental health. Even now at university, she still calls to check on me.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự liên kết và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng liên từ và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ: "Although rules help improve self-discipline, too many rules can be strict and limit creativity. Therefore, I prefer fewer rules."

例: Although rules help improve self-discipline, too many rules can be strict and limit creativity. Therefore, I prefer fewer rules.

提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ: "Definitely yes. When I was in high school, my math teacher was very strict and always required me to be on time."

例: Definitely yes. When I was in high school, my math teacher was very strict and always required me to be on time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ý và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ: "Actually, I have never thought about being a teacher. But if I were, I would prefer to work in a rule-free school because it might improve my flexibility."

例: Actually, I have never thought about being a teacher. But if I were, I would prefer to work in a rule-free school because it might improve my flexibility.

× Yes, Vietnamese school set up a large number of rules on students and these regulation are believed to regulate student on moral and behave in the right way.

✓ Yes, Vietnamese schools set up a large number of rules on students and these regulations are believed to regulate students on morals and behavior in the right way.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches: 'school' should be plural 'schools' to match 'a large number of rules'; 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to agree with 'these'; 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context; 'moral' should be plural 'morals' and 'behave' should be 'behavior' as a noun. Correct plural forms improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× On the one hand, rules may have student behave in the right way and improve their self regulations.

✓ On the one hand, rules may have students behaving in the right way and improve their self-regulation.

The verb phrase 'may have student behave' is incorrect; after 'have' in this causative sense, the object should be plural 'students' and the verb should be in the '-ing' form 'behaving' to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'self regulations' should be 'self-regulation' as a singular noun. This correction aligns with proper verb form usage and pluralization.

× On the other hand, students may be prevented from be being freedom or being creative by strict rules.

✓ On the other hand, students may be prevented from being free or being creative by strict rules.

The phrase 'from be being freedom' is incorrect. After 'prevented from', the verb should be in '-ing' form: 'being'. Also, 'freedom' is a noun, but the adjective 'free' is needed here to describe the state. Correcting to 'being free' is grammatically correct and semantically appropriate.

× Definitely yes, My high school teacher not only instruct me how to deal with math problem but also concern my mental health and now when I enter my university she still call me and ask about my health.

✓ Definitely yes, my high school teacher not only instructed me how to deal with math problems but also was concerned about my mental health, and now when I enter my university she still calls me and asks about my health.

The sentence mixes tenses and verb forms incorrectly. 'Instruct' and 'concern' should be past tense 'instructed' and 'was concerned' to match past events. 'Math problem' should be plural 'math problems'. 'Call' and 'ask' should be third person singular present 'calls' and 'asks' to agree with 'she'. These corrections ensure proper tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× Although guidelines may help students improve their self regulation or self-discipline, they are really strict. Or umm, lack of creativity if there are so many rules.

✓ Although guidelines may help students improve their self-regulation or self-discipline, they are really strict and may cause a lack of creativity if there are so many rules.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Or' to start a new sentence, which is not appropriate here. It should be connected with 'and' to show addition. Also, 'lack of creativity' needs a verb phrase to complete the sentence. The correction improves sentence structure and coherence.

× This question bring me about when I was, uh, when I was a student at high school and umm, my math teacher is really uh, hard and she always required me to come to class on time.

✓ This question brings me back to when I was, uh, a student at high school and, umm, my math teacher was really, uh, strict and she always required me to come to class on time.

'Bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'question'. 'Is' should be past tense 'was' to match past time frame. 'Hard' is better replaced with 'strict' to describe a teacher. These changes correct tense and word choice errors.

× Actually, I never think of being a teacher at school. However, supposing that I'm a teacher, I prefer work in the rule free school because is may improve my flexibility and the.

✓ Actually, I have never thought of being a teacher at school. However, supposing that I were a teacher, I would prefer to work in a rule-free school because it may improve my flexibility.

'Never think' should be present perfect 'have never thought' to express experience. 'Supposing that I'm' should be subjunctive 'I were' for hypothetical. 'Prefer work' needs 'to' before verb: 'prefer to work'. 'Rule free' should be hyphenated 'rule-free'. 'Is may' is incorrect; 'it may' is correct. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for grammar and clarity.