Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的なルールを明確に述べる必要があります。文法と語彙の正確さを向上させ、簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, students must attend classes from 8:30 AM to 3:30 PM and wear the school uniform every day.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由を具体的に説明することが重要です。接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開しましょう。

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because these rules help maintain order and teach them how to behave properly in society.

提案: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不明瞭です。質問に対して簡潔に答え、具体的な例や理由を述べて話を完結させる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I have had a dedicated teacher who supported me a lot. She taught me that life can be challenging, but with hard work, I can overcome difficulties.

提案: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。接続詞を使って文章をつなげると良いです。

例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because there are already many rules, and students should understand the purpose of each rule.

提案: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な状況や理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I had a strict teacher who often spoke firmly because she wanted to keep the class disciplined and focused.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べることを心がけましょう。簡潔で論理的な文章を作る練習が必要です。

例: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, it would be difficult to manage students and maintain order.

× Yes, I have some loose for workers at our office and for example we have to be work from each 30 to 5:30 PM.

✓ Yes, I have some rules for workers at our office and, for example, we have to work from 8:30 to 5:30 PM.

The word 'loose' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'rules' which is a countable noun. Also, 'some' is correctly used with plural countable nouns like 'rules'. Additionally, 'have to be work' is incorrect; it should be 'have to work'. The time 'each 30' is unclear and likely meant to be '8:30'.

× Yes, I do when students is going to school, so they have to either follow the some rules and that rules is connected with our social circumstance and the environment.

✓ Yes, I do. When students go to school, they have to follow some rules, and those rules are connected with our social circumstances and the environment.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'students'; it should be 'go'. 'Either' is unnecessary here. 'The some rules' is incorrect; it should be 'some rules'. 'That rules is' should be 'those rules are' to match plural subject and verb agreement.

× Yes, definitely yes yes, some teacher helped me is a lot of my career because they they're teaching me They were teaching me that is actual life is not easy and when I.

✓ Yes, definitely. Some teachers have helped me a lot in my career because they taught me that actual life is not easy.

The sentence has pronoun confusion and tense inconsistency. 'Some teacher' should be 'some teachers' to match plural pronoun 'they'. 'Helped me is a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'helped me a lot'. 'They they're teaching me They were teaching me' is redundant and confusing; past tense 'taught me' is appropriate here.

× No, I don't think so. There is many rules in school at school already, so I think as a average student should consider for each rule why that is existed.

✓ No, I don't think so. There are many rules in school already, so I think an average student should consider each rule and why it exists.

'There is many rules' is incorrect; 'rules' is plural, so 'there are' is correct. 'As a average student' should be 'an average student' because 'average' starts with a vowel sound. 'Consider for each rule why that is existed' is awkward; it should be 'consider each rule and why it exists'.

× Yes, I have so far 1 teacher who told me very strictly because this teacher is very nervous to a is a less have a lesson in our class because.

✓ Yes, so far I have had one teacher who spoke to me very strictly because this teacher was very nervous about having fewer lessons in our class.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'I have so far 1 teacher' should be 'I have had one teacher so far'. 'Told me very strictly' is better as 'spoke to me very strictly'. 'Is very nervous to a is a less have a lesson' is unclear; corrected to 'was very nervous about having fewer lessons'.

× No, I wouldn't like to walk in a rural free school because if there is no rule in the school, nobody can control for the students who they can who who can either act is as free is not under control.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because if there are no rules in the school, nobody can control the students who might act freely and be out of control.

'Wouldn't like to walk' should be 'wouldn't like to work'. 'Rural free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'If there is no rule' should be 'if there are no rules' to match plural. 'Can control for the students who they can who who can either act is as free is not under control' is confusing; corrected to 'can control the students who might act freely and be out of control'.