Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Of course we have rules in school, like no phones on school, uh, wear uniform like that. Every school have rules. So it's basically they should have rules in school.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
Of course I think they will benefit from more rules, they will will be discipline amongst students and they will have such a good ability to forfeiture. They all should be always on time like.
試験官
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
受験者
If I had a dedicated teacher, which is my English teacher, he is very strict, but he also teaches good at English. So I think he's very good on his teaching skills and which is me.
試験官
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
受験者
I think the answer is no because my school have lot of rules and it's kinda quite strict so I don't want anymore rules. It's enough to be that fit in the rules. You should be not dye your hair. It's from like personal but it's also you know.
試験官
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
受験者
Yes, I had a UMM, It was a social studies teacher and he's very, very strict. Before class he make a line for students and it's like military school for me. In that moment. I think he's very strict.
試験官
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
受験者
I would never work as a teacher in a rough field school. For example, when kids in rural free school, they will be disorganized, messy kids in the school and they will bad behavior to teachers, to anyone, and they're not gonna be disciplined. I don't think it's.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 60.0提案: Та хариултаа илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хэллэгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, my school has several rules such as no phone usage during classes and wearing a uniform. These rules help maintain discipline." гэж хэлж болно.
例: Yes, my school has several rules such as no phone usage during classes and wearing a uniform. These rules help maintain discipline and create a focused learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 55.0提案: Хариултаа илүү логик холбоотой, тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. "I believe more rules can help students become more disciplined and punctual, which are important skills for their future." гэж хэлж болно.
例: I believe more rules can help students become more disciplined and punctual, which are important skills for their future success.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
スコア: 50.0提案: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй, логик холбоотой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, my English teacher is very dedicated. Although he is strict, he teaches English very effectively." гэж хэлж болно.
例: Yes, my English teacher is very dedicated. Although he is strict, he teaches English very effectively and helps students improve their skills.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
スコア: 55.0提案: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд алдаагүй хэлээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I prefer fewer rules because my school already has many strict rules, such as not allowing hair dyeing." гэж хэлж болно.
例: I prefer fewer rules because my school already has many strict rules, such as not allowing students to dye their hair, which I find quite limiting.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
スコア: 65.0提案: Хариултаа илүү байгалийн, алдаагүй, логик холбоотой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, my social studies teacher was very strict. He made us line up before class, which reminded me of a military school." гэж хэлж болно.
例: Yes, my social studies teacher was very strict. He made us line up before class, which reminded me of a military school, but it helped maintain order.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
スコア: 50.0提案: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй, логик холбоотой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I would not want to work in a school without rules because students might become disorganized and misbehave." гэж хэлж болно.
例: I would not want to work in a school without rules because students might become disorganized and misbehave, making teaching very difficult.
文法
× Every school have rules.
✓ Every school has rules.
The subject 'Every school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.
× my school have lot of rules
✓ my school has a lot of rules
The subject 'my school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'lot of' should be preceded by 'a' to form 'a lot of'.
× he make a line for students
✓ he makes a line for students
For third person singular subjects like 'he', the verb should have an 's' at the end, so 'make' becomes 'makes'.
× my school have lot of rules and it's kinda quite strict
✓ my school has a lot of rules and it's kind of quite strict
Again, 'my school' is singular, so 'have' should be 'has'. Also, 'kinda' is informal and should be 'kind of' for clarity.
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