Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, use the correct word 'rules' instead of 'brews'. Make your sentences clearer and more concise by directly answering the question and providing one specific example.

例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must keep their hair short, which I found quite disappointing.

提案: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas logically. Also, be careful with grammar and plural forms, e.g., 'students' and 'rules'.

例: Not really, because too many rules can make students feel overwhelmed, and as a result, they might not want to follow them.

提案: Avoid filler words and improve grammar, such as verb forms ('devoted' should be 'devote'). Make your answer more coherent by using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, be specific about how the teacher was dedicated.

例: Yes, I had a dedicated French teacher who helped me a lot because she knew I was struggling and wanted to get into university.

提案: Use the correct word 'rules' instead of 'brews' or 'bruise'. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your opinion clearly.

例: I prefer fewer rules because having too many makes students feel restricted, and only the important rules are necessary.

提案: Avoid filler words and incorrect word forms like 'stricted' (should be 'strict') and 'followed' (should be 'follow'). Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples.

例: Yes, I had many strict teachers from elementary to high school who imposed many rules and got frustrated if we did not follow them properly.

提案: Avoid filler words and correct the phrase 'law free school' to 'rule-free school'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

例: Not really, because I believe a rule-free school is not effective; children still need important rules to guide their behavior.

× Thai schools are usually famous for a long list of brews.

✓ Thai schools are usually famous for a long list of rules.

The word 'brews' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'rules'. This is a vocabulary error but relates to plural noun usage. 'Rules' is the correct plural noun to describe regulations in schools.

× I need to keep my hair short.

✓ I needed to keep my hair short.

The sentence refers to a past situation ('my school had so many rules'), so the modal verb 'need' should be in the past tense 'needed' to maintain tense consistency.

× too many rules might not have a positive benefit towards student

✓ too many rules might not have a positive benefit towards students

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because 'too many rules' affects multiple students, so plural form is required.

× she would devoted her UMM afterward.

✓ she would devote her time afterward.

The modal verb 'would' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'devote', not the past participle 'devoted'. Also, 'UMM' seems to be filler and should be removed or replaced with a meaningful word like 'time'.

× I would prefer to have fewer brews, of course.

✓ I would prefer to have fewer rules, of course.

Again, 'brews' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'rules'.

× I I feels like we don't really need a lot of bruise, but we just need the important ones.

✓ I feel like we don't really need a lot of rules, but we just need the important ones.

'Feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. Also, 'bruise' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'rules'.

× all my teachers during uh, my elementary school to high school were all super stricted umm.

✓ all my teachers during my elementary school to high school were all super strict.

The adjective 'stricted' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'strict'. 'Strict' is an adjective and does not take the '-ed' ending here.

× they would be frustrated if we didn't followed it properly.

✓ they would be frustrated if we didn't follow it properly.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'followed' should be 'follow'.

× I I don't think that law free school is effective in raising children or even teaching children.

✓ I don't think that a law-free school is effective in raising children or even teaching children.

The phrase 'law free school' needs an article and a hyphen to form the compound adjective 'law-free school'. Also, 'law-free' is the correct form to describe a school without rules.