Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“roles”应为“rules”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写和语法，简洁明了地表达观点。

例: At my university, there are few rules, but in high school, there were many rules, such as wearing a uniform and restrictions on clothing.

提案: 回答中多次出现拼写错误（如“her”应为“their”，“roles”应为“rules”，“rose”应为“rules”），且表达不够连贯。建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

例: I believe freedom is important nowadays because students prefer to express themselves, so having too many rules can be harmful.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“supportable”应为“supportive”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。

例: I haven't had a dedicated teacher, but my teachers are usually open-minded and supportive of our ideas.

提案: 回答中拼写错误较多（如“roles”应为“rules”，“skin”应为“think”），且表达不够清晰。建议注意拼写和句子结构，避免重复表达。

例: I prefer fewer rules at school because students like to be themselves, and too many rules can make them unhappy.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“regular us”应为“required us”，且细节描述不够准确。建议加强语法和细节描述的准确性。

例: During high school, I had a strict teacher who required us to follow strict dress codes, like wearing skirts of a certain length.

提案: 回答中拼写错误（如“row”应为“rule”，“roles”应为“rules”），且表达略显重复。建议注意拼写并使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I would like to work in a school with few rules because freedom is important, although some people think too many rules are necessary.

× Actually in my university there aren't many roles in our school but when I was learning in high school there are many roles like a limited of our outfits, we can only wear the uniform to school.

✓ Actually in my university there aren't many rules in our school but when I was learning in high school there were many rules like a limit on our outfits, we could only wear the uniform to school.

这里的“roles”应为“rules”，且“roles”是复数形式，符合语境。动词时态应与时间状语一致，描述过去时应使用过去时态“were”。“a limited of our outfits”应改为“a limit on our outfits”，表达限制的意思。

× Actually I think her freedom is important thing in nowadays life because I think students don't like so much limited roles, they like to be themselves and I think too much rose is not good for today's children.

✓ Actually I think freedom is an important thing in nowadays life because I think students don't like so many limited rules, they like to be themselves and I think too many rules are not good for today's children.

“her freedom”应为“freedom”，此处不需要人称代词。形容词“important”前应加冠词“an”。“so much limited roles”应改为“so many limited rules”，因为“rules”是可数名词，需用“many”。“too much rose”应为“too many rules”，且“rose”拼写错误。

× No, I didn't have a dedicated teacher before. They are usually very open minded and also supportable what we want to do. And also I think they are very modern in their ideas, not really traditional.

✓ No, I didn't have a dedicated teacher before. They were usually very open minded and also supportive of what we wanted to do. And also I think they were very modern in their ideas, not really traditional.

描述过去的情况时，动词时态应使用过去时，“are”应改为“were”。“supportable”应为“supportive”，且“supportive”后应接介词“of”。“what we want to do”应改为“what we wanted to do”，保持时态一致。

× I prefer to have fewer roles at school because I skin think students nowadays like to be themselves and if there are many roles, students will be more dislike about that.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think students nowadays like to be themselves and if there are many rules, students will dislike that more.

“roles”应为“rules”，表示规则。单词“skin”是拼写错误，应删除。短语“will be more dislike about that”语法错误，应改为“will dislike that more”。

× Actually during my high school life there are a teacher that was not really open minded. She often regular us to do something that was really right. Like we need to wear our skirts that is longer than our nails.

✓ Actually during my high school life there was a teacher who was not really open minded. She often required us to do something that was really right. For example, we needed to wear our skirts that were longer than our nails.

“there are a teacher”应为“there was a teacher”，主谓一致且时态为过去时。关系代词“that”改为“who”更合适指人。动词“regular”用错，应为“required”。“Like”用作句首不正式，改为“For example”。“skirts that is”应为“skirts that were”，主谓一致。

× Yes, I think I would like to work in a row free school because I think nowadays freedom is very important in many countries. However, people would argue if there are too many roles in school.

✓ Yes, I think I would like to work in a rule-free school because I think nowadays freedom is very important in many countries. However, people would argue if there are too many rules in school.

“row free school”拼写错误，应为“rule-free school”。“roles”应为“rules”，表示规则。