Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "student" nên là "students" và "serve respect" nên là "show respect". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "have create" nên là "have created".

例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my university. For example, students must attend classes on time and show respect to their teachers. These rules help create a good learning environment for everyone.

提案: Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn để tránh các từ ngữ thừa như "uh" và cấu trúc câu cần rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để ý kiến của bạn được truyền đạt hiệu quả.

例: From my perspective, it depends. For example, a rule that encourages students to respect their teachers is beneficial because it raises awareness. However, some rules, like banning smartphone use, can limit students' freedom.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả người giáo viên tận tâm.

例: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. For example, in high school, my math teacher named Mr. Big was very enthusiastic and knowledgeable, which helped me improve a lot.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ bạn thích ít quy tắc hơn vì bạn có thể tự do và độc lập hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: As a student, I prefer fewer rules at school because it gives me more freedom and independence.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh sử dụng từ không đúng như "tactic" và "suggested" trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy mô tả giáo viên nghiêm khắc một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Definitely yes. At my university, I had a very strict teacher named Lam Loan. Although he was strict, I believe his teaching style benefited me a lot.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện ý kiến về việc làm giáo viên trong trường không có quy tắc.

例: I would like to work as a teacher in a school without strict rules because it would encourage creativity and motivation, and help students gain confidence for the future.

× Certainly, yes, there are several for the student at my university as well as other university or school.

✓ Certainly, yes, there are several for the students at my university as well as other universities or schools.

The nouns 'student', 'university', and 'school' should be plural to agree with 'several', which refers to multiple items. Using singular forms here is incorrect.

× For example, student must attend classes on time and serve respect to their teacher.

✓ For example, students must attend classes on time and show respect to their teachers.

The subject 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. Also, 'serve respect' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'show respect'. Additionally, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'students'.

× These rules have create a good learning environment for everyone.

✓ These rules have created a good learning environment for everyone.

The verb 'create' should be in the past participle form 'created' to correctly follow the auxiliary verb 'have' in the present perfect tense.

× if students so respect for their teacher is a good rule to uh, raising awareness.

✓ if students show respect for their teachers, it is a good rule to raise awareness.

The phrase 'so respect' is incorrect; it should be 'show respect'. Also, 'raising' should be 'raise' to match the infinitive form after 'to'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'students'. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

× However, uh, some rule limit their freedom, uh, such as using the smartphone.

✓ However, some rules limit their freedom, such as using smartphones.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to agree with 'some'. 'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' as it refers to general use.

× Oh yes, a part in my life I have made very dedicated teacher.

✓ Oh yes, at a part in my life I had a very dedicated teacher.

The phrase 'have made very dedicated teacher' is incorrect. The correct past tense is 'had a very dedicated teacher'. 'At a part' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× For example in my high school I study by umm math teacher who in name big.

✓ For example, in my high school, I studied with a math teacher whose name is Big.

The verb 'study' should be past tense 'studied' to match the past context. 'By' is incorrect; 'with' is the correct preposition. 'Who in name big' is incorrect; it should be 'whose name is Big'.

× He is a very enthusiast and good for the master.

✓ He is very enthusiastic and good at teaching math.

'Enthusiast' is a noun; the adjective form 'enthusiastic' is correct here. 'Good for the master' is unclear; likely intended to say 'good at teaching math'.

× As a student, I think I prefer less through a second because I have more free and independent.

✓ As a student, I think I prefer fewer rules because I have more freedom and independence.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns; 'fewer' is correct for countable nouns like 'rules'. 'Through a second' is unclear and removed. 'More free and independent' should be 'more freedom and independence'.

× In my university, uh, I enrolled A tactic teacher who is named Lam LOAN as he very suggested, but I think it is a benefit for me.

✓ In my university, I had a strict teacher named Lam Loan. He was very strict, but I think it was beneficial for me.

'Enrolled a tactic teacher' is incorrect; 'had a strict teacher' is appropriate. 'Named Lam LOAN' should be 'named Lam Loan'. 'He very suggested' is incorrect; 'He was very strict' is correct. 'It is a benefit' should be 'it was beneficial' to match past tense.

× I couldn't disagree with them because with a free a roof free they will help me more creativity, motivation as correct, help gain a confidence in the near future for example.

✓ I couldn't disagree with them because a free environment would help me have more creativity and motivation, and help me gain confidence in the near future, for example.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect phrases like 'with a free a roof free'. It is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly, using proper conjunctions and structure.