Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体例子。

例: As graduate students, we have few rules, but there are important ones like non-discrimination policies to ensure fairness.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议明确表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并给出具体理由。

例: I think it depends. More rules can help maintain order, but too many may increase costs and limit students' freedom.

提案: 回答不够直接且含糊，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子说明老师的特点。

例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher who was very outgoing and adapted her teaching methods to different students' needs.

提案: 表达有些重复且语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连贯的句子支持观点。

例: I prefer having rules because they guide us to know what is right and help us do our best at school.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但语法和时态使用不当，建议注意时态一致并丰富细节。

例: Yes, my English teacher in elementary school was very strict. She always checked our homework, and those who didn't finish it were punished.

提案: 回答表达混乱且语法错误较多，建议理清思路，直接表达观点并用具体理由支持。

例: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because it would be harder to manage students without clear rules.

× I think as a Graduate School students there is seldom have some rules for us, but we do have some non discrimination or rules.

✓ I think as a Graduate School student there are seldom any rules for us, but we do have some non-discrimination rules.

这里'students'应为单数'student'，因为主语是单数。'there is seldom have'结构错误，应改为'there are seldom any'。'non discrimination or rules'应为'non-discrimination rules'，表示'非歧视规则'。

× Small rules means we need to give students more monetary, which on the one hand relative to a high cost to human resource and on the other hand students may.

✓ Small rules mean we need to give students more money, which on the one hand relates to a high cost in human resources and on the other hand may affect students.

'means'应为复数'mean'，因为主语是复数'small rules'。'monetary'用错，应为'money'。'relative to'应为'relates to'。句子后半部分不完整，补充完整。

× Uh, luckily I don't have a very dedicated teacher. The teacher I met was very outgoing and flexible with teaching skills. Depends on students different umm characteristic.

✓ Uh, luckily I don't have a very dedicated teacher. The teacher I met is very outgoing and flexible with teaching skills. It depends on students' different characteristics.

描述现在情况时，动词应使用现在时'is'而非过去时'was'。'Depends on students different umm characteristic'缺主语，应改为'It depends on students' different characteristics'。

× I'm the kind of person who like rules. I think rules can help us to decide what to do and work. And as a young students, it's hard for us to find out what is right and what is wrong. So rules follow the rules. We can always do the best.

✓ I'm the kind of person who likes rules. I think rules can help us decide what to do and how to work. And as young students, it's hard for us to find out what is right and what is wrong. So by following the rules, we can always do our best.

'who like rules'中的'like'应为第三人称单数'likes'，因为先行词是单数。'a young students'中'students'应为复数，去掉冠词'a'。句子结构和表达做了适当调整以更通顺。

× Yes, my English teacher in elementary school is very strict, She check our homework already and the one who can't finish it will be punished.

✓ Yes, my English teacher in elementary school was very strict. She checked our homework already, and those who couldn't finish it were punished.

描述过去时应使用过去时态，'is'改为'was'，'check'改为'checked'，'can't'改为'couldn't'，'will be punished'改为'were punished'。

× Personally speaking, I don't want to because so that's true, school students may be more harder to control, even be give more right to students. That means they have more power to against their teachers. That's not bad for teacher.

✓ Personally speaking, I don't want to because it's true that school students may be harder to control, even if they are given more rights. That means they have more power to go against their teachers. That's not good for teachers.

'more harder'是比较级错误，应为'harder'。'be give'应为'are given'。'more right'应为'more rights'。'to against'用法错误，应为'to go against'。'That's not bad for teacher'应为'that's not good for teachers'。