Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, there are many rules such as safety rules, disciplinary rules and academic rules is an important part in school.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
Yes, of course it is a benefit to students behavior. For example, students must be wear gloves before doing experiments, experiments which guarantee their safety.
試験官
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
受験者
Yes, in my memory. When I was a child, I couldn't get a good grade in math. My teacher taught me until in the evening. Finally I catched a great grade.
試験官
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
受験者
I like them both in terms of sports. For example, students must be have a shower before swimming which can guarantee the swimming pool a nice condition.
試験官
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
受験者
Yes, when I was a child, my math teacher, umm, asked me to study until, uh, 12:00 in the evening. Umm.
試験官
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
受験者
Uh, I guess, uh, I don't want to, to work in a free school and it is difficult for me to, uh, discipline the students, uh, in my classes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免语法错误，并且回答时应更直接且简洁。
例: Yes, there are many rules at my school, including safety, disciplinary, and academic rules, which are important for maintaining order.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子冗长。建议使用正确的时态和语法，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。
例: Yes, I believe more rules can improve students' behavior. For example, wearing gloves during experiments ensures their safety.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中时态错误和用词不当较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意动词时态和词汇的正确使用，同时使句子更连贯。
例: Yes, I remember when I was a child, I struggled with math, but my teacher stayed late to help me, and eventually I got a good grade.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答不够明确，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议明确表达观点，使用正确的语法，并用连词连接句子。
例: I think some rules are necessary, especially in sports. For example, students must shower before swimming to keep the pool clean.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答中充满犹豫词，表达不流畅，且内容过于简单。建议减少填充词，丰富内容，使用完整句子。
例: Yes, my math teacher was very strict and often asked me to study until midnight to improve my skills.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答中充满犹豫词，表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议减少犹豫词，使用完整句子，并清楚表达观点。
例: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because it would be hard to manage the students.
文法
× Yes, there are many rules such as safety rules, disciplinary rules and academic rules is an important part in school.
✓ Yes, there are many rules such as safety rules, disciplinary rules and academic rules which are an important part of school.
句中主语是复数“rules”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。此外，介词应为“of”而非“in”。
× For example, students must be wear gloves before doing experiments, experiments which guarantee their safety.
✓ For example, students must wear gloves before doing experiments, which guarantees their safety.
情态动词“must”后应直接接动词原形“wear”，不能加“be”。
× Finally I catched a great grade.
✓ Finally I caught a great grade.
动词“catch”的过去式是“caught”，不是“catched”。
× For example, students must be have a shower before swimming which can guarantee the swimming pool a nice condition.
✓ For example, students must have a shower before swimming, which can guarantee the swimming pool is in good condition.
情态动词“must”后应直接接动词原形“have”，不能加“be”。另外，表达“保证游泳池处于良好状态”应使用“is in good condition”。
× Uh, I guess, uh, I don't want to, to work in a free school and it is difficult for me to, uh, discipline the students, uh, in my classes.
✓ Uh, I guess, uh, I don't want to work in a free school because it is difficult for me to discipline the students in my classes.
句子中“and”连接的两个分句逻辑不通，应改为“because”表示因果关系，使句子结构更合理。
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