Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

例: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, classes always start at 9 AM, and students must arrive on time. Additionally, we follow a strict schedule to ensure all lessons are covered.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: I believe having some rules is essential because they maintain order. Without rules, chaos could occur, making it hard for students to focus and learn effectively.

提案: Your answer tells a story but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and avoid unnecessary details that confuse the listener.

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated English teacher who gave me five books to study. Although I felt overwhelmed at first, her support helped me improve my skills significantly.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide clear reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid hesitation sounds like 'it's it's'.

例: Although I am no longer a student, I think schools should have fewer rules. This way, students can feel more motivated and understand the reasons behind the rules they do have.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid hesitation and finish your thoughts. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific examples.

例: Yes, I had a strict teacher who often raised his voice. Sometimes, I felt his strictness was excessive, which made the class uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by varying your vocabulary to sound more natural.

例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because teaching is demanding and requires passion. Since I don't have that passion, it's not my dream job.

× Yeah, of course school UMM always start at 9 and umm students have to go on time, they have certain lessons and umm, they have to study according to the school schedule.

✓ Yeah, of course school UMM always starts at 9 and umm students have to go on time, they have certain lessons and umm, they have to study according to the school schedule.

The verb 'start' should be in the third person singular form 'starts' to agree with the singular subject 'school UMM'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× In my opinion, there should be certain rules and all students have to follow it.

✓ In my opinion, there should be certain rules and all students have to follow them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular noun, but 'rules' is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. This is a pronoun usage issue related to modal verb context.

× Yeah, when I was learning English, I had really dedicated teacher, she gave me 5 books and sometimes I was sitting in front of table opening all these books and I was overwhelmed and I did not know where can I start.

✓ Yeah, when I was learning English, I had a really dedicated teacher, she gave me 5 books and sometimes I was sitting in front of the table opening all these books and I was overwhelmed and I did not know where I could start.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'really dedicated teacher' and 'the' before 'table'. Also, the question form 'where can I start' should be changed to the statement form 'where I could start' to fit the past tense narrative. These are article errors and sentence structure errors.

× Honestly, I'm not at school but I don't think there should be more rules. It's it's in my opinion, students should be more motivated and explained what's.

✓ Honestly, I'm not at school but I don't think there should be more rules. In my opinion, students should be more motivated and be explained what is expected.

The phrase 'It's it's in my opinion' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'In my opinion'. Also, 'explained what's' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'be explained what is expected' to clarify the meaning. These are sentence structure and incorrect use of pronouns issues.

× Yeah, I'm I had one of my teacher was really strict and sometimes I think he was more than he should be and rise his voice, which I don't think it's.

✓ Yeah, I had one of my teachers who was really strict and sometimes I think he was more than he should be and raised his voice, which I don't think is right.

The sentence has several issues: 'I'm I had' is incorrect and should be 'I had'; 'one of my teacher' should be 'one of my teachers' (plural); 'and rise his voice' should be 'and raised his voice' to match past tense; 'which I don't think it's' is incomplete and should be 'which I don't think is right'. These are singular/plural, past tense, and sentence structure errors.

× No, I never wanted to work as a teacher. It's not my dream and I just think being a teacher is very demanding and difficult and you really need to have some passion to be a teacher, which I don't have.

✓ No, I never wanted to work as a teacher. It's not my dream and I just think being a teacher is very demanding and difficult and you really need to have some passion to be a teacher, which I don't have.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain errors related to the specified grammar problem types.