Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“students here can't live too long”不符合语境，应为“students cannot be late”或类似表达。建议注意语法准确性和表达的清晰性，同时避免重复词汇。

例: Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and are not allowed to be late for classes.

提案: 回答较为自然且表达了观点，但可以通过使用连接词使句子更连贯，如使用“because”后加上具体例子或进一步解释。建议丰富细节，增强说服力。

例: No, I don't think so because having too many rules can make students feel stressed, which may reduce their creativity and motivation to learn.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“whom was”应为“who was”，且表达重复“to help her, to help the students”不清晰。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，避免重复。

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in high school. She was my English teacher and often stayed late after school to help students improve their writing skills.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“moderate number of rules at school is benefit”应为“a moderate number of rules is beneficial”，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法练习，表达更清晰。

例: I think having a moderate number of rules at school is beneficial because too many rules can cause stress, while too few rules may lead to a lack of discipline among students.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，“achieve a score that about seven”不清楚具体含义。建议使用更具体和准确的表达，并补充细节。

例: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in high school. She expected every student to score at least seven out of ten on tests.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，如“may not very disciplined”应为“may not be very disciplined”。建议注意语法完整性和用词准确。

例: Actually, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a school without rules because the atmosphere might be undisciplined and chaotic.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students here can't live too long and and the students must wear uniform in school.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students here can't be late too long and the students must wear uniforms in school.

这里的错误是“live too long”应为“be late too long”，意思是“不能迟到太久”，另外“wear uniform”中的“uniform”应为复数形式“uniforms”，因为指的是学生们穿的制服。

× She always stayed late after school to teach students, to help her, to help the students with their writing.

✓ She always stayed late after school to teach students, to help them with their writing.

这里“to help her”用法错误，应该用宾格代词“them”指代学生们，且不需要重复“to help”，保持句子简洁。

× I think moderate number of rules at school is benefit because too many rules can make students feel very stressed and on the other hand if rules are to feel it might lead to students lack of discipline.

✓ I think a moderate number of rules at school is beneficial because too many rules can make students feel very stressed and on the other hand if rules are too few it might lead to students lacking discipline.

“moderate number”前应加冠词“a”，“is benefit”应改为“is beneficial”形容词形式；“if rules are to feel”应为“if rules are too few”，表达“规则太少”；“students lack of discipline”应为“students lacking discipline”，动名词形式。

× Yes, I really had a very strict teacher in my high school. She was my math teacher and she asked everyone in the class to achieve a score that about seven.

✓ Yes, I really had a very strict teacher in my high school. She was my math teacher and she asked everyone in the class to achieve a score of about seven.

“a score that about seven”结构不正确，应改为“a score of about seven”，表示“分数大约是七分”。

× Umm, actually I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in that school because I think the atmosphere in the school may not very disciplined and maybe in a mess.

✓ Umm, actually I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in that school because I think the atmosphere in the school may not be very disciplined and may be a mess.

“may not very disciplined”缺少动词“be”，应为“may not be very disciplined”；“maybe in a mess”应改为“may be a mess”，表示“可能一团糟”。