Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并避免重复和语法错误。例如，使用“Students should not be late for class and must arrive on time.”同时，补充说明规则的作用时，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students should not be late for class and must arrive on time. I think these rules are necessary because they help maintain order and ensure everyone can learn effectively.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连接词使句子流畅。例如，先表达观点，然后给出原因。

例: No, I don't think students would benefit from having more rules. Too many rules can limit their freedom and make them feel uncomfortable. Also, some students might ignore excessive rules.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如'delicate'应为'dedicated'），建议使用正确词汇并清晰描述老师的特点和行为。

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated Chinese teacher in primary school. She always encouraged me and taught me many valuable lessons about life.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议直接表达偏好，使用完整句子，并给出具体理由和例子。

例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because it makes students feel more comfortable and enjoy studying. For example, having fewer restrictions allows us to be more creative in class.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，建议使用正确时态和单复数形式，表达更自然。

例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher at university who taught me accountancy. Many students did not like him because he was very strict.

提案: 回答中表达矛盾（'uncomfortable'应为'comfortable'），建议注意用词准确，表达清晰。

例: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because fewer rules can create a more comfortable environment where both students and teachers have more freedom to enjoy learning.

× For example, like students not be late in class, should be uh, at class on time.

✓ For example, students should not be late to class and should be on time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'should be uh, at class on time' and lacks proper modal verb structure. 'Should' is a modal verb and must be followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'not be late' needs to be structured properly with 'should not be late'. The phrase 'at class on time' is better expressed as 'to class and should be on time'. Suggestion: Use 'should' followed by base verb and correct prepositions.

× And I think it is necessary to make the rules for students because it can uh useful to.

✓ And I think it is necessary to make rules for students because it can be useful.

The sentence misses the verb 'be' after 'can' which is required for correct modal verb usage. 'Can' must be followed by the base form of a verb, so 'can be useful' is correct. Also, 'the rules' can be simplified to 'rules' for general meaning. Suggestion: Always include the base verb after modal verbs like 'can'.

× Not really I think in my opinion I disagree more and more rules to students because enough freedom and will make students feel uncomfortable and some people will don't follow these rules.

✓ Not really. In my opinion, I disagree with giving more and more rules to students because enough freedom is necessary, and too many rules will make students feel uncomfortable. Also, some people will not follow these rules.

The sentence has multiple modal verb and auxiliary verb errors. 'Will don't' is incorrect; it should be 'will not'. Also, 'disagree more and more rules' is incorrect; it should be 'disagree with giving more and more rules'. The sentence also lacks proper conjunctions and articles. Suggestion: Use 'disagree with' + noun/gerund, and 'will not' instead of 'will don't'.

× Yes, I have a night in primary school.

✓ Yes, I had one in primary school.

The phrase 'have a night' is incorrect in this context. The past tense of 'have' is 'had'. Also, 'a night' is unclear; likely the student meant 'a dedicated teacher'. Suggestion: Use past tense 'had' for past experiences and clarify the noun.

× My Chinese teacher is very delicate for example, she always teach me and the let me know more things about my life.

✓ My Chinese teacher is very dedicated. For example, she always teaches me and lets me know more things about my life.

'Delicate' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'dedicated'. Also, 'teach' and 'let' need to be in third person singular present tense 'teaches' and 'lets' to agree with 'she'. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think the rule is more or less than we will feel more comfortable so that we can in enjoy studying.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think having fewer rules will make us feel more comfortable so that we can enjoy studying.

The phrase 'the rule is more or less than' is unclear and incorrect. 'Fewer' is used correctly for countable nouns like 'rules'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'fewer' for countable nouns and clarify sentence structure.

× Yes I had. I have really strict teacher in my university and he teach me accountancy.

✓ Yes, I had. I had a really strict teacher at my university and he taught me accountancy.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the experience is in the past, 'have' should be 'had' and 'teach' should be 'taught'. Also, 'in my university' should be 'at my university'. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for past experiences and correct prepositions.

× He is a very strict teacher so that many student doesn't like him.

✓ He is a very strict teacher, so many students don't like him.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many'. Also, 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'students'. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× Yes I do because I think real free school has less rules so that students and teachers can have uncomfortable studying environment and get more freedom to enjoy study.

✓ Yes, I do because I think a real free school has fewer rules so that students and teachers can have a comfortable studying environment and get more freedom to enjoy studying.

'Less rules' should be 'fewer rules' because 'rules' are countable. 'Uncomfortable' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'comfortable'. Also, 'study' should be 'studying' to match the gerund form after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: Use 'fewer' for countable nouns, correct adjectives, and use gerunds after 'enjoy'.