Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti 'or they rather stay outside'.

例: When I was in college, students had to enter the classroom before the class started; otherwise, they had to stay outside and could not join the lesson.

提案: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, namun ada kesalahan kata seperti 'damage' yang tidak tepat dalam konteks ini. Gunakan kata yang sesuai dan perhatikan penggunaan linking words agar jawaban lebih koheren.

例: Yes, I definitely think students would benefit from having more rules because it helps them develop important skills like discipline, responsibility, and self-control. For example, when students follow a strict schedule, they learn to organize their classes better and avoid procrastination.

提案: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas. Namun, Anda bisa menambahkan sedikit detail lagi untuk memperkaya jawaban dan menggunakan linking words untuk kelancaran.

例: Yes, I have. When I was in college, I joined an international class where many teachers were very dedicated to teaching us according to international standards. Their passion and commitment really motivated me to improve my skills, which made learning much more enjoyable.

提案: Perhatikan penggunaan kata yang tepat, misalnya 'rules' bukan 'rolls', dan gunakan bentuk jamak jika perlu. Selain itu, perbaiki tata bahasa dan tambahkan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

例: I prefer having fewer rules at school because it gives students more independence and helps them develop discipline. For example, when students can manage their own time, they learn to be responsible and make better decisions. Moreover, this kind of freedom creates a more positive and interesting school environment.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa seperti 'which very strict'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan jelas serta perbaiki tata bahasa.

例: Yes, I have. When I was in high school, there was a very strict math teacher. For example, we had to read all the lessons we were going to learn the day before and complete the homework as well.

提案: Perhatikan penggunaan kata yang benar, misalnya 'rule-free' bukan 'row free'. Selain itu, perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih terstruktur.

例: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it requires a lot of patience. Without clear rules, children tend to be more active and sometimes uncontrollable, which can make managing the class very difficult. Therefore, I believe having some structure helps both teachers and students.

× When I was in college, students were required to enter the classroom before the class started or they rather stay outside and not following the class.

✓ When I was in college, students were required to enter the classroom before the class started or they would rather stay outside and not follow the class.

The sentence mixes past tense with incorrect modal verb usage and verb forms. 'They rather stay' should be 'they would rather stay' to express preference in the past, and 'not following' should be 'not follow' to maintain parallel verb form. The modal verb 'would' is necessary to express preference in past context.

× Yes, I definitely think students would benefit from having more rules because it helps them to develop important skills like discipline, damage, and self-control.

✓ Yes, I definitely think students would benefit from having more rules because it helps them to develop important skills like discipline, damage control, and self-control.

The word 'damage' is incorrectly used as a skill. The correct term is 'damage control', which is a skill related to managing or mitigating damage. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I prefer having fewer rolls at school because it gives students more independence and helps them develop discipline.

✓ I prefer having fewer rules at school because it gives students more independence and helps them develop discipline.

The word 'rolls' is a misspelling of 'rules'. 'Rules' is the correct plural noun referring to regulations or guidelines, which fits the context of the sentence.

× For example, when students can manage their own time, they'll learn to be responsible and make better decision.

✓ For example, when students can manage their own time, they'll learn to be responsible and make better decisions.

The word 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' because it refers to multiple instances of making choices. Using the plural form matches the plural subject 'students' and the context.

× This kind of freedom also creates more positive, interesting school environment.

✓ This kind of freedom also creates a more positive, interesting school environment.

The noun 'environment' is singular and requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'more' is needed before the adjectives to indicate comparative degree. This correction fixes article usage and adjective modification.

× When I was at high school, there was a math teacher which very strict.

✓ When I was at high school, there was a math teacher who was very strict.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' should be used instead. Also, the verb 'was' is missing before 'very strict' to complete the predicate.

× Like the day before, we have to read all of the lessons that we're going to learn and also the homework.

✓ Like the day before, we had to read all of the lessons that we were going to learn and also the homework.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the present tense 'have' and 'we're' should be changed to past tense 'had' and 'we were' to maintain tense consistency.

× For me, I would not like to work as a teacher in a row free school because it requires a lot of patience.

✓ For me, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it requires a lot of patience.

The phrase 'row free' is a misspelling of 'rule-free'. 'Rule-free' correctly describes a school without rules.

× Children tend to be more active and sometimes uncontrollable without clear rules which can make managing the class very difficult.

✓ Children tend to be more active and sometimes uncontrollable without clear rules, which can make managing the class very difficult.

A comma is needed before 'which' to separate the relative clause. The sentence is otherwise correct in singular/plural usage.

× I believe having some structure help both teacher and students.

✓ I believe having some structure helps both teacher and students.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'having some structure'.