Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Uh, especially there is some kind of rule that, uh, restrict the students, uh, at the school level, uh, there is restrictions to carry or carry or carrier mobile phone, uh, some laptops or some kind of gases or, or some dirty things in school or, uh, school, uh.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
Yeah, definitely if the schools, uh, make uh, some restrictions or make some rooms to other students, uh, do some things and they also concentrate about the studies and homemarks and also going for the assignments and the research about homework, how to how to do it in the saw, how to solve it.
試験官
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
受験者
Yeah. Uh, in my school there was one teachers is called Ram Kumar Sharma. Is there really dedicated and really appreciable teachers who really hard work, uh, to carry on, uh, their assignments and really check our homeworks and also get our exciting factors to understanding their teaching habitually.
試験官
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
受験者
MMM, I prefer more rules in high schools because uh, students are really engaged in different factors, uh, due to the UN, uh, unnecessary parts. And if the schools uh, umm, give us some freedom to, to the students, then they go for another type of, uh, things. If gay, uh, if uh, they gives a rules and attach then.
試験官
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
受験者
Yeah, in my schools there there was 1 teacher's name Hari Krishna Chabakai, the har. The teacher is really strict about their classroom and also in outside and they teach a math in our class and there there is so conscious and really amazed in their teaching Hari.
試験官
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
受験者
Not exactly, but if I get uh, some extra factors and schools then I will definitely choose or definitely go to schools to teach uh, a child and uh, young students and uh, umm, share my experience about my factors and different things.
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総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 45.0提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions, which affects the natural flow. Try to give a direct and concise response with clear examples of rules. Avoid filler words and redundancy.
例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring mobile phones or laptops to class to avoid distractions. Also, carrying any harmful or inappropriate items is strictly prohibited.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer is vague and contains many hesitations. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help maintain discipline. For instance, stricter rules about homework and assignments encourage students to focus more on their studies and improve their academic performance.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific about what made the teacher dedicated.
例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Ram Kumar Sharma. He worked hard to prepare assignments and always checked our homework carefully. His enthusiasm made learning interesting and helped us understand the lessons better.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
スコア: 40.0提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to clearly express your preference and explain your reasons with specific examples. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete.
例: I prefer having more rules in high school because students can get distracted easily. For example, strict rules help prevent students from wasting time on unnecessary activities and keep them focused on their studies.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer provides some information but is affected by grammar errors and unclear phrasing. Try to clearly describe the teacher's strictness and how it affected your learning. Use complete sentences and avoid repetition.
例: Yes, I had a strict teacher named Hari Krishna Chabakai who taught math. He was very disciplined both inside and outside the classroom, which helped us stay focused and improve our math skills.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
スコア: 45.0提案: Your answer is vague and contains many hesitations. Try to clearly state your opinion about working in a rule-free school and explain your reasons. Use clear and complete sentences without filler words.
例: I would not prefer to work in a rule-free school because rules are important for maintaining order. However, if given the opportunity, I would like to teach young students and share my knowledge and experiences with them.
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