Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

× Well, honestly speaking, they're lot.

✓ Well, honestly speaking, there are a lot.

The phrase 'they're lot' is incorrect because 'they're' is a contraction of 'they are', which does not fit here. The correct phrase is 'there are a lot' to indicate the existence of many rules. This is a singular and plural issue because 'lot' needs to be preceded by 'a' and 'there are' to agree with the plural noun implied.

× and most of my eyes are in most of our time, our school system thinks that it's gonna be better to forbid rules to get their students better and.

✓ and most of my time, our school system thinks that it's better to forbid rules to help their students improve.

The phrase 'most of my eyes are in most of our time' is incorrect and confusing. It seems the student meant 'most of my time'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'better to'. The pronoun 'their' correctly refers to students. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× actually spending too much on providing a strong and generally varied rules can effectively decrease a student's behavior and a generally discipline at all.

✓ actually spending too much on providing strong and generally varied rules can effectively decrease a student's behavior and general discipline overall.

The phrase 'a strong and generally varied rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'a generally discipline' is incorrect; 'discipline' is uncountable and should not have 'a'. The quantifiers and articles need to agree with the noun forms.

× Honestly speaking, I had that one and who always somebody waited me to and inspired me to do more things just gradually just getting my grades better.

✓ Honestly speaking, I had that one teacher who always encouraged me and inspired me to do more things, gradually improving my grades.

The phrase 'somebody waited me to' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'encouraged me to'. The pronoun use and verb choice were incorrect. Also, the sentence structure was awkward and needed correction for clarity.

× I prefer more having a fever rolls at school because this is what actually helps people to, this is what actually helps students be organized and make a balance between their school and personal life, I think.

✓ I prefer having fewer rules at school because this actually helps students be organized and balance their school and personal life, I think.

The phrase 'a fever rolls' is incorrect; it should be 'fewer rules' because 'rules' is plural and 'fewer' is used with countable nouns. 'More having' is also incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer having'. This is a singular and plural issue combined with incorrect quantifier use.

× Well, honestly speaking, I have never had a strict teacher who would who would force me to study. He is a subject.

✓ Well, honestly speaking, I have never had a strict teacher who would force me to study a subject.

The phrase 'He is a subject' is incorrect and confusing. It seems the student meant 'to study a subject'. The pronoun 'He' is incorrectly used here and should be removed or replaced with the correct object. The sentence needed correction for pronoun and sentence structure.