Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn.

例: Yes, my school has several important rules. For example, students must be punctual, follow the dress code, and avoid any academic misconduct.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'too much rules' (phải là 'too many rules'). Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn và dùng từ phù hợp để làm rõ ý kiến của bạn.

例: I don't think having too many rules benefits students because strict regulations can cause stress and reduce motivation. Instead, schools should focus on developing students' personal qualities.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều/số ít (teacher thay vì teachers). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I had a dedicated English teacher at university. She was enthusiastic and always helped me understand difficult topics. I felt very grateful for her support.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng không chính xác như 'remove fairness' (có thể bạn muốn nói 'ensure fairness'). Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer a reasonable number of rules at school because they help ensure fairness and maintain discipline among students. Rules should focus on promoting good behavior.

提案: Bạn nên nối các câu ngắn thành câu dài hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý dùng đúng mạo từ như 'a lot of homework' thay vì 'a plenty of homework'.

例: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in secondary school. She gave us a lot of homework, which was stressful, but she helped me improve my discipline and study habits over time.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'fruit free school' thay vì 'rule-free school', 'disciplined' thay vì 'discipline'. Bạn nên kiểm tra kỹ từ và cấu trúc câu để tránh nhầm lẫn.

例: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because it would be very challenging to manage the class. Students might behave badly without rules, making teaching difficult.

× Yes, My scores also has a comprehensive set of codes of conduct in some academic rules, the keys ones focused on punctuality for students adhering to the specific dress code, and some policies avoiding misconduct in academic.

✓ Yes, my school also has a comprehensive set of codes of conduct and some academic rules. The key ones focus on punctuality, students adhering to the specific dress code, and some policies avoiding misconduct in academics.

The original sentence has plural and singular mismatches such as 'scores' instead of 'school', 'has' with plural subject 'scores', and 'keys ones' instead of 'key ones'. Also, 'in academic' should be 'in academics'. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and noun forms.

× I don't think having too much rules at school would benefit student because I think strict regulations will make them feel very stressed and less motivated and even more this will tifa their reactivity and innate ability.

✓ I don't think having too many rules at school would benefit students because I think strict regulations will make them feel very stressed and less motivated. Moreover, this will affect their reactivity and innate ability.

'Too much rules' is incorrect; 'rules' is countable, so 'too many rules' is correct. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Even more this will tifa' is unclear and likely a typo; replaced with 'Moreover, this will affect' for clarity.

× When I was a university student at that time, I had an enthusiastic and passionate English teachers.

✓ When I was a university student, I had an enthusiastic and passionate English teacher.

The subject is singular 'I', so 'teachers' should be singular 'teacher'. Also, 'at that time' is redundant with 'when I was a university student' and can be omitted for clarity.

× I prefer to have a reasonable amount of rules at school because I think they should remove fairness and maintain discipline among student.

✓ I prefer to have a reasonable number of rules at school because I think they should ensure fairness and maintain discipline among students.

'Amount' is used with uncountable nouns; 'rules' are countable, so 'number' is correct. 'Remove fairness' is incorrect; likely meant 'ensure fairness'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'.

× She always gave us a plenty of homework which made me very stressed and uncomfortable.

✓ She always gave us plenty of homework, which made me very stressed and uncomfortable.

'A plenty of' is incorrect; 'plenty of' is the correct form without 'a'. This is a quantifier usage issue related to plural nouns.

× No, I wouldn't like to work in the fruit free school because this environment will require me a lot of dedication, patience and disciplined, making me very tired and uncomfortable to manage the class effectively.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because this environment will require a lot of dedication, patience, and discipline from me, making me very tired and uncomfortable managing the class effectively.

'Fruit free school' is a typo for 'rule-free school'. 'Require me a lot' should be 'require a lot from me'. 'Disciplined' is an adjective; the noun 'discipline' is correct here. 'Uncomfortable to manage' should be 'uncomfortable managing'.